All I can say is heart-breakingly beautiful. You start off showing such a vulnerable side of Hermione - that she's still a hopeless romantic despite what love has done to her, and on a second reading I got a sense even then that she still loved Ron.

Just the whole idea for the plot was great and also very realistic. At the beginning I had a sense that Hermione was only really living for her children and no longer for herself, and that Ron brought life back to her.

It has definitely intrigued me... I wonder under what circumstances it was that Ron actually left? I think it's a realistic thing for him to do - he does have a temper and make spur-of-the-moment decisions, but I like the idea that he always makes up for it in the end.

The relationship between Rose and Hugo was drawn beautifully - the teasing but underneath the pride and admiration was not cliched, but realistic.

I think it's an interesting idea that Rose broke off her engagement with Scorpius for her father - I think we often see examples of people who break away from their families for love (eg Andromeda) and don't mind too much because they didn't agree with their family, but I think it's interesting that Rose thought her father was more important than the man she loved.

So all in all, I've fallen in love with this fic, you've just done a fantastic job.

~Katrina

That was short but sweet!!! It sounds a lot like Ron...

Author's Response: Thanks! That was what I was aiming for!

I loved it! The whole daddy daughter relationship was wonderful. I hope you also write more about Rose and Scorpius.

Author's Response: I will be definitely writing more Rose/Scorpius. I really love the pair. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

Aww that is sooo sweet i love it when she says your a jerk daddy. but thank you,for everything i love you. And isnt it ironic how he told her on her first day of hogwarts to stay away froom him? hahah oh well one can't deny the one you love =) excellent writing!!

Author's Response: THank you!

dont worry its not your fault (last coomment) lol
i just dislike it because i dont want my friend snogging some blond guy if she got the part and then jk decided to write about after hogwarts, plus she has her eye on another boy

Author's Response: Haha, glad it's not me!

this is so good!! i love it!!! great job, its exactly teh personalities of Ron and Hermione.

Author's Response: Thanks!

awww this was perfetc i love scor and Rose together!! loved it

Author's Response: Thanks!

That was beautiful! -wipes eyes because it was so lovely- The ending was perfect. You got the relationships between Ron and Hermione and Rose and Ron and Scor and Rose and Rose a Hugo and Rose and Lily and Al and Hugo and Rose and Al -whew!- perfectly. I thank you for another wonderful and amazing story!
~Katie

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Amazing! I absolutely loved it! You did a great job of describing Hermione's love for her children - and Ron. I loved the bit where Ron kisses her and Hermione goes back to their first kiss and the emotions she felt then. I adored the ending.
Amazing job. *adds to favorites*
~fawkeshermione



Author's Response: Thanks!