Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 04/28/08 17:15
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

ooo... very nice. *applauds*

Reviewer: Accio_Rain
Date: 02/12/08 11:45
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

I don't have much to say, except that you really made me look at Bellatrix's insanity differently. I regret naming my puppy Bellatrix. Lol, not really, I love that name.

Reviewer: Accio_Rain
Date: 02/12/08 11:38
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

I don't have much to say, except that you really made me look at Bellatrix's insanity differently. I regret naming my puppy Bellatrix. Lol, not really, I love that name.

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 01/21/08 21:47
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

I read somewhere that the worst thing about going insane is that somewhere, in some corner of the mind, a sane fragment may be left behind, a mute witness to the rest of the mind's aberrant thoughts and behaviors, unable to intervene, to stop the wrongness.

Another author opined that if one were to witness the evil that one had done while insane (assuming it led to Bella's sort of evil), if the person recovered his sanity, he would be driven to kill himself.

Good work!

Reviewer: Weasleyboyfreak
Date: 01/21/08 19:22
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

I love this story! I think that you have capturd Bella and her insanity perfectly. It give a little insight into what happened to Nevilles parents and how she got dragged off to Azkaban! Great work! I think you totally did Ms. Bellatrix justic!
~Kayla

Author's Response: wow, thanks Kayla!

Reviewer: mrsweasleymum
Date: 01/21/08 16:49
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

that was painfully dramatic. But very well written. i like your style of writing.

Author's Response: whoops. :)

Reviewer: mrsweasleymum
Date: 01/21/08 16:49
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

that was painfully dramatic. But very well written. i like your style of writing.

Author's Response: i suggest reading a humor fic after this one. ;) thanks so much for the lovely review!

Reviewer: jessip
Date: 01/21/08 2:22
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

wow that was really well written. Great fic.

Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/20/08 22:22
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

I liked the way that you portrayed the lovely insane Bellatrix in this fic. I think we can all safely agree that she was not all there. Great one shot :-)

Author's Response: thankyou! I was a little nervous about this one, but I think it came out well in the end. And yes, Bellatrix is deffinetely a tad bit wacko. But she's an interesting character to write about. :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SnivellusLovegood
Date: 01/20/08 21:04
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

i could just imagine the whole thing,
and only a good writer can do that.

LOVED iT!!
i would definately give it 5 stars :]
(it made my skin crawl too)

Author's Response: Thank you! you have no idea how happy your review made me!

Reviewer: LadyElyssa
Date: 01/20/08 19:46
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

OMG! That was amazing! Jeez it made my skin crawl!!

Author's Response: aw, thanks! that's what I was aiming for, it good to know i succeeded! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Garnok
Date: 01/20/08 18:13
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

Excellent One Shot!


Author's Response: why thank you, Garnok!

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 01/20/08 17:05
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

no matter what sayla says i absolutley love this fic! :D



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 01/20/08 17:05
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

no matter what sayla says i absolutley love this fic! :D



Author's Response: ha ha, thanks! glad to know some of you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Sayla Nable
Date: 01/20/08 17:01
Chapter: A Funny Thing.

Interesting fic...
I was actually really confused about this for a couple paragraphs. It took me a minute to figure out that "the woman" and "the man" were Alice and Frank Longbottom. I think you should have specified early on who you were talking about, and possibly referred to them as Alice and Frank, rather than just "them."
I had trouble distinguishing the "she" that meant Alice and the "she" that meant Bellatrix, too. I would have found it easier to read if the fic had been written from first person, rather than third.
Also, it gets a bit sloppy at the end. Don't rush through the exciting parts too much, or the readers get confused.
Overall, the fic was good, it just needs a bit of improvement here and there. I don't mean to sound harsh, and I don't want you to take this the wrong way. I liked the fic a lot. Keep writing.
~Sayla

Author's Response: i completely understand where you are coming from. I didn't want to use names in this fic because i wanted the readers to have to think about who this was all happening to. I wanted it to be a little confusing. But I know what your saying, and I will work on making it less confusing and rushed. :) thanks for the review and advice!

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