Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/31/08 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Out of the Shadows

I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a very interesting topic, and I'm glad Remus met a friend, and a smart one at that. I loved the line: "Odd, isnt it? The two people he trusts most are the two traitors in his midst.
Please, update soon!

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can. I've gotten all the way to chapter five handwritten, but I still need to type everything up. I'm a type-slacker. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can. I've gotten all the way to chapter five handwritten, but I still need to type everything up. I'm a type-slacker. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Oops. I'm not trying to spam the response or anything. I've never had that happen before...weird.

Reviewer: Sayla Nable
Date: 01/19/08 17:28
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

Wow. This was very good. I really like your way of describing things. You make them seem almost real. The only thing I can think of that would make your fic better is to be wary of making sentences too long and wordy. They kind of tire out the reader, and they get hard to understand. Otherwise, the fic was really enjoyable.
~Sayla

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I do tend to get kind of wordy sometimes. My editor didn't technically read the whole thing. She said she skipped what she called the "long, romanticized discriptions." I'll work on that in the future. Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: missgiggles316
Date: 01/19/08 15:11
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

OMG!! I loved it!! I had an idea for something like this, but never got around to writing it. I'm glad someone else did, though. It's great, can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Isn't it cool (and somewhat annoying in a weird way) when someone has the same idea you do? That happened to me, too...creepy. Thanks! I'm almost done with chapter one, so I'll submit it soon. Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/18/08 21:38
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more of this story. Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll update as soon as I can! I promise!

Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 01/18/08 18:06
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this story! Keep on writing! I can't wait for the next chapter! Very interesting story too!
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've already got most of the next chapter written, I just need to type and submit it.

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