Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 07/23/08 23:50
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

OMG! I love this so much! Please, tell me that you are going to write more. I really want to be able to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Don't worry--I've already written the next two chapters, but I need to find a beta, and I've been so busy this summer I haven't had time to update. I will once school gets in, though.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 04/05/08 13:40
Chapter: Chapter 3: Moonlight Secrets

Wow... nice one, I never saw it comming.

Author's Response: Thanks! I had to make an evil OC sooner or later, though...

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/05/08 3:20
Chapter: Chapter 3: Moonlight Secrets

I think you're missing a full stop in the sentence below.

“No, Tonks, she reminds me of you She’s always telling me not to be so sorry for myself and to just marry you already.”

You have the capital and everything.

Anyway, I really like this story. I wish there was more to it then is posted her, but alas, no.

So, please update soon.

Keep up the good work. I really do love this story.

~ Parchment and Quill :)

Author's Response: Whoops! I'll go and fix that! Thanks for telling me and for reviewing!

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/05/08 3:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: Truth Among Friends

Hmm. An interesting chapter. Sarah really is a professional liar. And looks a lot like Harry (emerald eyes and raven black hair?)

Keep up the good work.

~ Parchment and Quill

Author's Response: Thanks! I still am feeling really stupid for not noticing how much she looks like Harry. I swear that was a total coincidence!

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/05/08 3:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: Out of the Shadows

I noticed something when reading the chapter. You've described Sarah's appearance a lot like Harry's. Why is that?

I really like this chapter. Keep up the good work.

~ Parchment and Quill

Author's Response: Wow, I totally didn't notice that she sounded like Harry. I just came up with her based off of, well, a very, very ragged-looking version of what I used to wish I looked like. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/05/08 2:55
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

A nice first chapter. I'm guessing Remus is off trying to get the werewolves to change sides by now?

Keep up the good work. I really like it so far.

~ Parchment and Quill

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, he's kind of just trying to keep himself alive and find out all their plans by this point...

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 04/02/08 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 3: Moonlight Secrets

Very cute! I'm glad that Tonks let him in! It was nice with Remus telling Tonks he loved her, even if she was asleep.
Interesting thing with Annabeth...something tells me that's not going to be good...
Great chapter! Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! This was my favorite chapter to write, too. I'm really getting nervous about the upcoming chapters, because they talk a bit more about...stuff that might make this story need a higher rating. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: looneylove4gryffindor
Date: 04/02/08 16:08
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

ooo, intriguing!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 04/01/08 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: Truth Among Friends

Uh-oh, here comes trouble! I hope Remus gets out of there alright.
Great chapter! Sara is awesome, I loved the part about her being a professional lier.
Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've submitted the next chapter (again). I accidentally hit the semicolon key instead of the comma. It was rejected for typos, so I'm sure it'll go through this time...

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 03/11/08 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 2: Truth Among Friends

I like it. Clever and different (and favouited)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Voldamortisevil19
Date: 03/02/08 17:09
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

Hello. Again. You know, I really hate you, and your good writing skills. Yeah. Oh well. Love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Katie

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, plus, some good news is I applied to be a PI accredited beta, so maybe I could beta stuff for you so it'll get in and everyone can praise you and that sort of thing. ~Remora

Reviewer: Vampire Hunter Blade
Date: 02/22/08 19:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: Truth Among Friends

Admittedly a whole lot more interesting than I thought it would be. I like it a LOT

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 02/08/08 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: Truth Among Friends

You keep comparing Sara to Tonks, it's driving me mad trying to figure out--is she...no, she can't be...but maybe...agh. But she's Greyback's daughter? He'd know--Remus would know--or maybe...I don't know. I'm completely incoherent, and definitely curious. In a very bizarre way, that's a compliment of sorts. Update soon, (or whenever they figure out the database thing) and have a good weekend!

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 02/08/08 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: Truth Among Friends

You keep comparing Sara to Tonks, it's driving me mad trying to figure out--is she...no, she can't be...but maybe...agh. But she's Greyback's daughter? He'd know--Remus would know--or maybe...I don't know. I'm completely incoherent, and definitely curious. In a very bizarre way, that's a compliment of sorts. Update soon, (or whenever they figure out the database thing) and have a good weekend!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's my birthday tomorrow (today? I think it's past midnight already. I'm typing this while on my sleeping bag watching Order of the Phoneix) and I hope for my one day out of the year when I actually have luck, they'll get it up. Is Sara--what? She's not Tonks' sister or anything if that's what you mean. I guess this may be kind of a spoiler but anyone who cares to read her page on the Forums knows her Mum's a Muggle so I guess it really isn't a spoiler. So yeah. She's not related to Tonks. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 02/08/08 22:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: Out of the Shadows

Interesting. I'm not entirely sure I like Sara as a character, or how open she and Remus are with each other so soon, but at least you acknowledged with Remus being 'taken aback' how easily they confide in each other. I'm curious about Sara's background as well...there are some stories there, you suggest?

Author's Response: There are many stories in Sara's past. They're part of the reason she's so...dark and mysterious and all that. Thanks for reviewing! (If you want to know about Sara, I have a page about her on the Forums. It's under the Character Clinic thing)

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 02/08/08 22:00
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

That last line made me shiver! You'd think Remus would be more careful than to carry around a photograph in a werewolf camp, but it was kind of a prickly, foreboding way to start the story. You do a good Greyback, by the way. All right, next chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks! I had no idea how to do Greyback so I decided to act like...uh, I think it was an evil substitute I once had, but I can't remember for sure. I'm glad you think it's good!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 02/08/08 8:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Truth Among Friends

Interesting. The plot thickens........

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope this stupid hacker/apocalypse of doom thing is sorted out soon so I can submit the third chapter soon! It's probably my favorite so far.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 02/08/08 8:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: Out of the Shadows

Uh-oh. What's he gonna say?

Author's Response: *Plays ominous music* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 02/08/08 7:56
Chapter: Prolgue: Unexpected Ally

Wow. Nice, the ominous touch really works here. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love being ominous!

Reviewer: missgiggles316
Date: 02/01/08 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: Out of the Shadows

Yay!! An awesome first chapter!! It was so cool! This was my favorite part:
“What do you know about it?” snapped Remus. “You’re only thirteen.”

“Remus, listen to me,” Sara said gently. “Love is all that matters. As for how I know this…well, I don’t want to talk about it just yet.” She bowed her head, hiding her face behind a veil of sable hair.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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