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Reviews For When it all began

Name: A House Elf (Signed) · Date: 08/09/06 13:52 · For: The first night


Name: miss padfoot (Signed) · Date: 04/08/06 22:22 · For: The first night
I'm not a great poetry fan as well, but this was was cute. Simple, though, but made me smile. The language was easy to understand and it was not a big problem for someone like me to follow. The rhyming was nice, though, you could have made each line of even length. Some lines have only a few words while others are long, and that's kind of weird. Anyway, I enjoyed the poem. Short and sweet.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 04/08/06 1:28 · For: The first night
I have to say, that I'm not much of a peotry fan, but this really made me smile. So the fact that I read yours through is a huge compliment! I liked your use of muli-versed quatrains. The language was simple and easily understood but you picked good verbs/adjectives to convey your meaning. I appreciated the fact that it was humorous. Overall I found it very enjoyable. Good work!

Name: james and lily fan (Signed) · Date: 03/18/06 11:07 · For: The first night
wow! great job that was an awesome poem! i just love J/L stuff its so cute!! (as you can prbly tell from my name) good job!

Name: Aidayla (Signed) · Date: 01/30/05 1:07 · For: The first night
That was absolutely adorable!!!! Rock on!!! lol

Name: Loonylovegood426 (Signed) · Date: 01/26/05 6:00 · For: The first night
AAAAaaaawwwww! That was a really sweet poem! I LOVE it! I love Lily/James stuff, it's soooo cute! Keep writing! MORE LILY AND JAMES PLEASE?!?!?! :) (Oh, and by the way, *10*)

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reviewing. I like this story too, but it was a one-shot fic. I wanted it to be more chapters, but, giving the lack of L/J information in the books, I figured the next chapter would just be kind of stupid with a lot of lack of canon. Thanks again!

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