I really enjoyed this chapter. I think you really captured Hermione's personality perfectly. I can't wait to read the other chapters! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! I really need the encouragement! Sorry it's taken me like months to respond, but I haven't been on this site. I tried to upload my 2nd ch. on here, but something funky happened and it disappeared. So, I've just been kinda lazy and didn't resubmit it here. But if you do wanna read the 2nd ch. it's on harrypotterfanfiction.com and fanfiction.net! I would be excessively pleased if you did! And, although I've been hampered by severe writer's block, I think I'm almost done with the third chapter! Yay? Again, thank you so much!!! :D
I really liked this, it shows that Hermione was always a little bit of an outsider even before Hogwarts, that is until she Harry and Ron became friends. The dream was really scarey, it was also very real, will we find out what it means soon? Can't wait to read on so PLEASE update.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reading and commenting!!! I'm so glad you liked my Hermione. :) I'm sorry it's taken me months to respond, but I haven't been on this site. It was being all weird when I tried to upload my second chapter, so I, erm, I got kinder lazy and gave up on this site, but there's good news! If you do wanna read the second ch. it's harrypotterfanfiction.com and fanfiction.net! I would be excessively pleased if you read it! And I promise you'll eventually find out what the dream means, but it's supposed to be mysterious! Also, I think I'm almost finished with the third chapter! So please go read! :D Yay?