I used to read this fic a couple years ago, wishing you would update. I just rediscovered MuggleNet and, here I am, still waiting for an update. Please? With all your desirable toppings on top??
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!!!
I love your work - it is fantastic
Author's Response: Thank you! :]
*Yay* - Update! This chapter is good; internal protagonist struggles are always good. :) Nice interaction of father/daughter at end :P
Author's Response: Thanks! :]
Well that was dramatic. Classic family get together- haha. Or not. I really like the emotions you continually put into your writing, although this chapter has caused me to be curious to no extent about certain things mentioned that have not yet been revealed!! Ahh, the end of each chapter kills me every time as I realize there is no [next] button.
Author's Response: Yes, drama is something a Potter gathering certainly needs! Haha, and don't worry your pretty head about those things, m'dear :] All shall be revealed soon... Muhahaha... oh, wait, not the time for an evil laugh. Haha.
Hmm.... not your best chapter. You've still got excellent writing abilities - maybe it's just because the chapter is rather short and not much happens. But I will keep reading, because I still love the story :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the chapter! I hope the next one's a little more to your liking :] Thanks!
Amazing Story. Can't wait to read more. I like the strong personality and unique style. I was wondering how old Noel was. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you :] I'm glad to hear I'm unique in a fanfiction world, haha.
Wow- look who is back? I’m shocked you picked up again. I was about to delete the link when I decide to take one more look. And lo and behold, Grace is back in action.
I know life gets in the way of writing, but you are working on a very good story. This Grace is someone who could find herself in any fic working many angles.
Keep you fingers moving and you’ll keep her alive. She needs to live – I want to know more about her. And just like you had her write – you can do the same.
Good job.
Author's Response: I'm shocked as well! To be honest, I had no idea where this plot bunny was headed until recently when inspiration struck me like a cricket bat to the knee. Thanks for the kind words! This just made my day :]
I like the last piece of intrigue. Are we soon going to find out in detail what she did?
Author's Response: Thank you! :] I think it'll be pretty clear soon enough. Thanks for reading!
I absolutely love this story! I haven't read one like it yet, and it portrays a really harsh reality from Noel' point of view that I love. Noel is such a character is hard not to love her - great job with
writing this story and I can't wait for chapter seven!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I'm original in a fanfiction world [irony? hahaha], and thanks for reading! :]
DUDE WHEN ARE U GONNA UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! i like ur story
Author's Response: :O The sixth chapter's in the queue and I'm glad you like it! :]
Whoop keep it up, keep writing! I wana know the truth now.....
Author's Response: Aw thanks! The sixth chapter is in the queue! :]
Okay, what is going on????
Author's Response: Stick around to find out! :] Thanks for reading!
That's good!
it's an interesting point of view, and an even more interesting story!
Can't wait to see the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :]
Oh my.... I'm not sure I want to read on or not but I am going to, I'm shocked and curious and hooked and how could Harry do something like this? Idiot for want of a better word. And Vlad sounds like a weasley.......
Author's Response: Thankies for reading!
Intrigue. That about describes it. Why has Noël been disowned? What would make someone who only ever wanted a family do that? How long has she been disowned? What is her relationship with Vlad? I realize that these Answers will probably have to wait for later, but, you've got me hooked.
Author's Response: Whew, that's a lot of questions! And yes, they'll all be answered. Thanks for reading!
Ooh, you've got me hooked! I can't wait to see what Noel did to get disowned. And also, I have a strange suspicion that Vlad has some relation to the Weasley clan...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Overall, this was a very good fic, but I can't help but wonder why wizards would have an underground fighting league when they could have a dueling league? I would find it much more believable if Noel was a dueler rather than a fighter.
Don't get me wrong, I like your writing style, and I enjoyed the fic, I just would enjoy it more if you included more magic.
~Sayla
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yeah, I tried to create a unique fighting league free from magic, but thanks for the review!
Well, I'm intrigued to say the least - especially what she could possibly have done so badly that Harry would disown her.
~Evie
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
