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Reviews For Into the Fire

Name: Cwiddy (Signed) · Date: 02/20/08 10:49 · For: Into the Fire
Nice use of the quatrain format of a poem. Your rhymes are beautiful and the rhythm of this poem flows. Nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 01/15/08 1:24 · For: Into the Fire
That was a really touching poem. You captured Minerva just right. Your verses were nicely done, your wird choice was suitable for the mood of the poem and...well it ws a great poem. 9/10.=Sammy
Its kinda impossible to get a 10 from me. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I don't mind, I think getting a 10 seems like getting a brown noser!

Name: Lalalalatina (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 17:20 · For: Into the Fire
Great poem, Dumbledore's death was very sad, as was the poem. A stanza that I especially liked was:
Even the very bravest amongst us–
Those who are noble, kind and wise–
Have pushed aside the ones they love, thus,
In pushing them down, letting evil rise.

[I really liked those last two lines!]

The only suggestion I can give is to divide up or reduce the size of some of your longer lines. I know how that can be hard sometimes, especially with poems that rhyme, but it will overall help the flow and appearance of the poem.

Great job and keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love that part too!

Name: voldiegirl (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 8:53 · For: Into the Fire
Aww! Thank you! *hugs clumsywerewolf* I meant emo in a good way! Keep up the good work with poems!

Author's Response: Thanks! *hugs voldiegirl*

Name: voldiegirl (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 8:51 · For: Into the Fire
Kewl. Emo enough, way too sad. *sniff* I'm so proud of you! It's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I am not emo, Luna. Or was that a compliment? Whatever, you pwn. Thanks for reviewing!

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