Reviews For Safety
Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/07/08 9:27
Chapter: Safety

I love this story, its so good!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: prongs_n_me22
Date: 07/02/08 13:27
Chapter: Safety

wow. this was so brilliant. Im almost to the point of tears.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks!

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 06/23/08 21:51
Chapter: Safety

This was a fine piece of writing, and fit perfectly with the Potter books. If it is a letter to Severus, and not just Lily thinking one to him, I wonder how he reacted when he read it. Cried, probably. Poor Snape. But this idea makes so much more sense than the authors who have Lily just suddenly decide one day that James isn't so bad after all, and is really her true love. She comes to it so much more naturally, and finds happiness in a way Snape never managed. Pretty impressive.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 05/07/08 10:17
Chapter: Safety

Wow. That didn't end the way I thought it would. Good story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Lilypotter55
Date: 03/21/08 19:50
Chapter: Safety

Awwwww.....how sweet!I liked how she at first didn't love him, then when the little Harry came, she fell madly in love with him. It's soooo sweet!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: LunaWorshiper
Date: 03/09/08 8:32
Chapter: Safety

I nsolutly love it, it is amazing!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/27/08 16:18
Chapter: Safety

This was great! I'm glad that Lily grew to love James, even if she didn't in the begining. It was a nice touch with her telling this all to Severus. Very sad, and very sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: emLILY EVANS
Date: 01/25/08 19:03
Chapter: Safety

omg wow i love all ur storys they r mad amazing they realy get me to think

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: pheonixfire28
Date: 01/25/08 7:03
Chapter: Safety

WOW!!!!! that was sooooooooooo good!! really that was the best story i have ever read!!1

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 01/23/08 21:17
Chapter: Safety

excellent story, great writing! slightly confusing tho.

Author's Response: Hope it wasn't too confusing! Thanks!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 01/21/08 7:54
Chapter: Safety

Awwwwwwwwww, nice one.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: liseberg
Date: 01/15/08 22:44
Chapter: Safety

I started crying halfway through reading this. You're such an amazing author, and the whole James loving Lily more than Lily loves James (in the beginning) really ties into the scene Harry saw in the fifth book, when he was scared that James had forced Lily to marry him.

Author's Response: Thank!

Reviewer: liseberg
Date: 01/15/08 22:44
Chapter: Safety

I started crying halfway through reading this. You're such an amazing author, and the whole James loving Lily more than Lily loves James (in the beginning) really ties into the scene Harry saw in the fifth book, when he was scared that James had forced Lily to marry him.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: liseberg
Date: 01/15/08 22:43
Chapter: Safety

I started crying halfway through reading this. You're such an amazing author, and the whole James loving Lily more than Lily loves James (in the beginning) really ties into the scene Harry saw in the fifth book, when he was scared that James had forced Lily to marry him.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know a lot of people have wondered if James did something to get Lily to marry him (I don't believe this), so I thought it'd be interesting to see that play out.

Reviewer: liseberg
Date: 01/15/08 22:41
Chapter: Safety

I cried in the beginning! The whole James loving Lily more than Lily loves James thing is very original, and it makes connects to the whole scene that Harry saw in the fifth book when he was worried James forced Lily to marry him.
You're an amazing author; I love all your stories.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 01/15/08 17:09
Chapter: Safety

Absolutely beautiful. I loved the part at the end when she reveals she'd been talking to Severus the whole time. I always enjoy your work as an author. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I will.

Reviewer: kbell
Date: 01/15/08 16:51
Chapter: Safety

That was really sweet...slightly sad, but still really sweet. I loved the tone you wrote with throughout the whole story.

I never thought of the situation this way before. What a great angle to tackle the James-and-Lily story from.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: aussigirl
Date: 01/14/08 20:25
Chapter: Safety

Wow. Amazing story! Nice twist- very unique.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 01/14/08 5:26
Chapter: Safety

Wow, that was just... I was shocked to hear this sort of thing from Lily, but you had her IC the whole time and I could see it. Wonderful work, well done :)

Author's Response: THank you!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 01/13/08 17:21
Chapter: Safety

Aww so sweet!! How do you come up with this brilliant writing??

Author's Response: Haha, I wouldn't call it brilliant, but thank you nonetheless. *grins*

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