This story seems really interesting. The letters at the end were nice way to expand on Lily and James's relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, letters are a good way to get to know more about the characters' relationship. Thank you for the review.
I really liked it ... especially the letters at the end
Author's Response: I'm glad you did. Thank you for the review.
This is a really good start! I can't wait to see where you take this. The writing had a nice flow and I love the characterization of Lily and James, I also like how you've managed to make their relationship more complex than Lily-hates-James/James-drools-over-Lily. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you want to continue reading this fanfiction. And I hope you'll continue to want to read the next chapter, and the one after the next. Thank you for the review!
What a fun way to start a story! I really liked it. Your summary also suggests there's a decent plotline to come - can't wait to read more. Just wondering if most of the story is to be done in letters, or in standard prose?
Great work once again.
Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, the whole story is to be done in prose. The letters are just for the prologue. Yes. I hope you'll continue reading this fanfiction and giving me feedback. Thank you for your review!