aww! I love the unsent letter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it's lovable, I was wondering if it was a little too mushy. (:
update soon, please! :D
Author's Response: I'll try, but the next chapter might take a long time in coming. Blame it on school!
this fic is amazing
it's a great idea to have a compitition even though it would be mean to james
i feel i can really symaphise with the characters when i reaad this because you have written it so well
keep it up
Author's Response: I'm really glad that the characters feel real enough that you can feel for them. And thank you for saying that I write well! And yes, it's mean to James, but he'll just have to suck it up and be a man. :D Thank you for dropping by!
Very nice! I really like how you incorporated the letters. I can't wait until the next chapter! It's very good writing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Good start on your story! I liked how you incorporated the letters. =]
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the rest, too. (:
That was great. I dont really like Amelia that much but oh when she fins out Lily and James love eachtother i bet shes gonna get mad and tell james it was a bet and then lily and james will break up for a while and then they'll realise they love eachother soo much. Gosh did i tell aeveryone the plot?? Soorry my bad!! =]]
Author's Response: Nice try, but no. (:
The tension is so hilarious! Keep it coming.
Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks for dropping by. (:
I really loved this chapter!!! You have developed the story in a very nice manner. The characters are so real and well-developed. I personally feel that you have a lot of talent at writing and I am eagerly awaiting the updation of the next chapter!!
ALL THE BEST!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you felt that the characters seemed real. I'd love for readers to sympathise with them, you know, and they can't actually do that unless the characters feel real enough. Thank you for the compliment, I wish I can live up to it! And thank you for the review! It's nice to know what you people like.
it's coming along nicely! i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: And I hope I'll get it out soon. (: Thank you!
haha cute! i love the way you describe lily's charactor. but i kind of feel bad for james. it isnt fair to him. but anyways update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, it is, isn't it. Poor James. I hope you'll continue reading this fic!
Was that the end, good start....
If you keep it up it will be great
Author's Response: Thank you!
Hey, this is soo cool! Damn u, i wish that i could write that good! But i have no hope... so i might as well keep reading other people's stories!!! This is great and i want to read the next bit!! Plz, if u can, post it soon!!!!
Author's Response: I hardly write well! There're tons and tons of people who can write better than me. Still, thanks for the flattery all the same. (:
good, wheres more!
Author's Response: I'll try to crank out the next chapter as soon as possible, but I have quite a lot of things to juggle at the moment, so it'll take quite a bit of time.
it was brilliant the letters were funny
Author's Response: They were? Thanks for the review!
that was interesting.......it was good
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, and I hope you'll continue reading it! Thanks for the review!
I like the letter aspect to say the least,
although on the other hand it slows down the plot a bit.
Author's Response: You're right! It does slow down the plot. But Lily would hardly say "yes" so easily to James, wouldn't she? Thanks for the review!
lololol very funny and cute :D
Author's Response: You really think so? Thanks for the review!
It was good. I liked Lily's sort of down-to-earth personality and James' persistence. I can't wait for the challenge!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked her personality. I hope you didn't find James too persistent, though. I didn't want readers to think he's the kind who asks Lily out three times a day or something. Because I don't want James to be that annoying and persistent. (: Thanks for the review!
Great start! I loved the part with the letters, especially the unsent one. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I hope you'll stick around to read more! I can't wait for MNFF to be restored-- thanks so much to the lovely mods who're helping its restoration! Oh, and thank you for the review!
Hmm. I like this so far and I eagerly await more =]
Author's Response: I'm glad you want to read more of this fanfiction. Thank you for the review! (: