Reviewer: blue eyed girl
Date: 01/16/08 12:51
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

I love this! It's so funny! Keep up dating! :D

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Tina Tissue
Date: 01/15/08 19:55
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

I love it how u made lily not like all the other fics. Cause normaly, they make her less wierd and more or the 'practualy perfect in everything' kind of lily. Keep it up. I want to read more

Author's Response: thanks so much! just waiting for the 2nd chapter to get validated!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 01/13/08 17:53
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

Ha i love your vesion of Lily a bit odd (exactly like me minus the amazing james potter prince charming thats in lvoe wiht me oh and the amazing red hair and green eyes) youve just created a lily just lke me!!

Author's Response: haha, a lot of people say that lily is like them, lily's personality is like me too! I huess she's like a lot of us. :) She just gets weirder throughout teh story tho. thx for review!

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 01/13/08 16:47
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

I REALLY REALLY LOVE THE CHAPTER! I like how you didn't make lily like some perfect person like some of the other fics.

Author's Response: THANKS!!!!! I'm doing my best to get away from all the cliche's, the story gets pretty weird because of that!

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 01/13/08 13:38
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

What year is Lily?
You have a very distinctive narrative voice that adds character to the story. It seems a little AU, though--I feel like Lily wouldn't hate her sister, just be sad that Petunia dislikes her so much. I'm interested to see how your Cinderella idea plays out.

Author's Response: She's in seventh year. It isn't AU, we honestly don't know that much about lily, just a bunch of stuff taht we've assumed. everyone seems to be under the impression taht she's some perfetc, beautiful, goody-two-shoes. well, i personally ahve never seen anything in the books that says that. There really isn;t that much we know about her except she was pretty, smart and funny. My lily has all those attributes, but she has a few quirks too, she isn't perfect! I know what you're saying about petunia, she probably was like that, but i'm not writing a sad story about her relationship with her sister, this was designed as a humor fic, so i'm not going to be delving too deep into the relationshsip thing! Thanks for reviewing!!!! :)

Reviewer: Tabithah09
Date: 01/13/08 12:49
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

this looks like it's going to be a great story. i love lily's personality in it. she comes off as boring and uptight in a lot of stories, but i like her much better this way. i look forward to updates soon, i hope. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I've been trying to get this story on this site forever, but it was accepted on some other sites so i already have like 12 chapters written, updates will come very fast for a while! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: SiLvEr_DrAgOn
Date: 01/12/08 23:25
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

Hillarious ... i loved it

Author's Response: Thank you!

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