Reviewer: webmaster510
Date: 07/08/10 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 4

plzplzplzplzpzlpzl please update your the only person who doesnt make lilly out to be some perfect stuck up im better than everyone else because im smart kind of hermoine person and i love it!!!!!!! please update!

Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 01/02/10 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 4

HA! Like I said- I LOVE THIS STORY! Especially the part about James wanting Lily to kiss him. Another great chapter! Keep them coming!

Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 01/02/10 19:01
Chapter: Dancing on the Roof

Oh my gosh! Ok, I have to say I've fallen in love with this story! It's sweet, it's funny... it makes you think you're reading a story written by a published author. I'm not joking. This story is good enough to be published in my opinion.

Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 01/02/10 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 2

Ha,ha,ha! I promise you, I laughed at pretty much every other paragraph! Brava, bravo!

Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/29/09 20:37
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

OH my god! I love this story! U wanna no why? Because I can completely RELATE to Lily. I jus soooo graceful and no one thinks I'm weird **Wink, wink**.

Reviewer: harvey17
Date: 05/20/09 17:32
Chapter: Chapter 4

I absolutely love this. The style is so light and funny.

Reviewer: TonksFan434
Date: 02/14/09 14:42
Chapter: Chapter 4

I love this story:)
I laughed so much!
Update ASAP please:)

Reviewer: muggler180
Date: 11/12/08 12:24
Chapter: Chapter 4

when are you going to update?

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 11/12/08 9:01
Chapter: Chapter 4

another fantastic chapter!! i loved it! lily has the funniest sense of humor!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 11/12/08 8:45
Chapter: Dancing on the Roof

she danced on the roof? haha thats very original!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 11/12/08 0:00
Chapter: Chapter 2

that was so incredibly funny!! lily getting so mad that she sits in the mud puddle again! lol i loved it!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 11/11/08 23:47
Chapter: The Sleepwalker

i really like Lily's voice, it reminds me a bit of Bella from Twilight.

Reviewer: The-heir-of-Gryffindor
Date: 10/02/08 11:53
Chapter: Chapter 4

i cant wait for the next chapter.
lily is just as i thought she would be!!
its great!!!

Reviewer: PeaceLovePotter
Date: 08/16/08 21:42
Chapter: Chapter 4

I love your story so far! In a lot of Lily/James romances Lily is always a goody-two-shoes sort of person, but you actually made her weird! It's so cool!!!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 07/30/08 17:15
Chapter: Chapter 4

Wow. I love this fic. =D gREat chapter! =]

Reviewer: Move-Over-Ginny
Date: 07/27/08 18:38
Chapter: Chapter 4

I absoloutly positively LUV it!Update! ur like awesome bc I love how Lily is so....idk like AWESOME!!!! This story is hysterical!

Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 07/24/08 0:15
Chapter: Chapter 4

LOL!!!!!!!! That was wonderfully hysterical! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 07/20/08 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 4


Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 07/20/08 20:47
Chapter: Dancing on the Roof

Wow. This was brilliant, again.

Lily is so humourous. You capture teeange awkwardness quite nicely.

xD Wonderful job.

Reviewer: muggler180
Date: 07/20/08 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 4

i just read all four chapters straight i love this story. Hope you update soon

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