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Name: YouMaySayNymphadora (Signed) · Date: 05/30/08 0:16 · For: Chapter 3: The Rescue & Mission Complete
Well done! I enjoyed it very much!

I completely forgot about Bogarts when I began reading that part and was wondering what you were up to... nicely done.

I loved that the story had Tonks handling the mission all on her own. Too often the stories I read make it seem as if Tonks needs a partner to accomplish anything she does. On the other hand, I do understand that in a time of war, everything is even more dangerous and it's even more vital that it's done correctly... So, having a partner does not neccessarily mean that you are incapable of doing your job well on your own under normal circumstances. Whatever those may be.

And of course I love the sweet ending!

Author's Response: Thanks again for another great review. Remus and Tonks are my favorite ship from cannon. Glad you enjoyed my story!

Name: briar_weasley (Signed) · Date: 02/22/08 1:25 · For: Chapter 1: Recruitment & the Password
Ok, but too much description of every detail.

Also, it's Dark Mark, not Death Mark

Author's Response: thanks for the review. Sorry you did not enjoy the descriptions...but that is what I'm trying to improve right now. THanks!

Name: Pottergirl (Signed) · Date: 01/26/08 13:22 · For: Chapter 2: To the Rendezvous
Close call with Draco; and the Boggart was a nice touch! Keep up the good work!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter will hopefully be up soon. :)

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 20:58 · For: Chapter 1: Recruitment & the Password
I love how you worked Luna into the story. I also have always enjoyed your version of Tonks! Great Story sis!! Cyns

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Name: DMTAT003 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 15:59 · For: Chapter 1: Recruitment & the Password
The story is well written; do you recommend other good At Hogwarts Stories? I really like Tonks's character and Neville's.

Author's Response: Hello! Glad you enjoyed! Next Chapter coming as soon as I can get it through cheque! As for other at Hogwarts stories...I know Cheshlin has a good story about the cats at Hogwarts...(pre-DH). Otherwise, I'm sorry but haven't had time lately to read as much fanfiction as I would like. Good luck in your search though!

Name: LandL2 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 11:33 · For: Chapter 1: Recruitment & the Password
Good start! Can't wait to read more! I'm not too sure but, wasn't dobby dead by then? I cant seem to remember but ah well, its just a detail!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Not sure if Dobby was dead by then, guess I could use Kreature...but I liked the idea of Dobby more! ;) next chapter is in cheque to hopefully will be up soon. I have it all written...just need to get it up!

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