I love this story, but I read it months ago, and really hoping you update soon. I feel so disappointed everytime I check on it and see you haven't updated. :[
I think this chapter is a great start. You set up a story that has so much potential, I really hope you plan another chapter. I'd love to see some more interaction between Mary and James or Sirius. You wrote those parts really well.
You need to uptate this as fast as you can. I am now hooked on this story. Poooorrrrrrrrrrrr Mary I feel so bad for her.
Please update soon. I love this story, and Mary is an amazing character! I pity her. I would hate to feel like she does, and now that I think of it, I would too jump off a high height if I loved someone as much as Mary loves James and he didn't love me back. Oh, God...How sad.
This story is so sad!!!!!
I love the concept, and also the character of Mary.
Please update soon!! I have no life so will be anxiously awaiting haha....I promise I'll review!
Ahh! This ended up SO perfect! I'm glad you took most of my changes to heart and didn't find me overly-picky! This is AMAZING! I can't wait for more! Again, if you need anymore help, don't hesitate to PM me! Good luck! --Joy.
This is an amazing fic! Keep it up. I'm hooked
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I defintley will keep writing. Thanks for being my first review!