Oh my… that’s… wow… I can’t even speak of what I’ve just read. Great concept, the entire idea of this story. Please continue writing, it’s killing me to not know what’s going to happen.
Author's Response: haha, the next chapter is in the queue as we speak, so I'm hoping it'll be up in the next few days. Thanks for reviewing!
Whoa. Snape. Callie...Snape...Lily...HARRY!
OOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGG
That is some crazy shit you've got going in this story, and I'm totally in love with it! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: haha thanks so much!
Wow! Now THAT is a shocker!! I guess he's Callie's father, then. I'm sitting here in a state of shock, at what happened, but I guess Lily had some love in her heart for Severus, or else she would have pushed him away.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Great story, too! ;0)
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thanks for the update. it was really good can't wait for another
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Well, wonder if now Harry knows Cally is his half sister that he'll start inviting her round on special occasions, it'd be nice for her. I'm not so sure he'd appreciate learning what happened between Lily and Severus, it might ruin the perfact picture he has of his mum. At least it's not as bad as i first thought, at least she concented, but I'm afraid I can't agree with what she did, if someone is in a relationship however early, they shouldn't be with anyone else. Can't wait for the next chapter, is it possible that Lily will go with James soon and Cally's paternity will be under question, or is it deffinately Snape? Will James or even Snape know of Cally's existence or will Lily manage to hide her pregnancy? Hope you update soon, i love this fic.
Author's Response: Yeah, Lily doesn't exactly agree with what she did either; as shown by her diary entry, she feels like a pretty horrible person right about now. As for your questions, you'll just have to wait and see--the next chapter should be along shortly =] Thanks for reviewing!
Argh! I detest cliffhangers, but the stor ysi wonderful
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Wow, this is ..... it's just ..... just ...... Wow!
So, my prediction is that her father's name is Severus Snape. That or you're going to make some big thing up and make her James' child.
I think I want to make her James' child, only because I can't comprehend Snape having one.
Anyway, back to what I was saying. This is really .... Wow .... and ..... yeah, keep up the good work.
Hope to have an update soon!
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm still writing the next chapter, but it shouldn't be too long before it's up. =]
Is Snape Callie's father, from what I've read from that journal entry? What's Callie's hair color again? I'm afraid I've forgotten.
At least Callie managed to clear things up with Harry by finally revealing that she is (half-)sister. Now Harry has one other family member. I wonder how he is taking it.
Author's Response: Hmm, I don't think I've mentioned Callie's hair color yet, but I've been imagining it as about the same as Lily's. You'll see more of Harry's reaction in the next chapter, which should be done within the next couple of days. Thanks for reviewing! =]
You've definitely managed this differently than I would have expected! :) I was right about Callie's father, but I sort of pictured it being Severus and Lily as something of a secret couple for ages because of the Slytherin-Gryffindor thing, and having problems because of who his friends were but still dating in some kind of clandestine fashion that looks like friendship on the surface, and then Lily finding out that she's expecting some time not long after the "Mudblood" incident and never letting him know. So the plot-line definitely surprised me. I'm glad she finally told Harry what was going on-- I love their exchange about Petunia. I'm looking forward to Callie's reaction to this particular bit of news next chapter... but not as much as I'm looking forward to Harry's reaction. ; )
Author's Response: Haha thanks so much. I could never really picture Snape and Lily being involved in a romantic relationship, so this, in my mind, was the most likely way it would have happened. Thanks for your review!
oh i need to know who callie's father is!! please update!!
Author's Response: haha I added the next chapter a couple days ago...I'm hoping it'll be validated soon =] Thanks for reviewing!
I had started reading this story at the begiing, and then Mugglenet had to shut everything down, and when it came back, I had forgotten all about this story.
Anyway, I had to catch up and the last 2 chapters, were wonderful as is the rest of the story. I'm glad Callie is getting to know Lily, through Lily's diary. And Callie has to tell Harry who she is.
Anyway, great story, I hope evrything turns out well for Callie in the end.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! =]
Wow, this was fantastic! Can''t wait for the next part. I don't suppose Lily and James would have Callie and give her up as they did end up married in the end. I know this seems awful, but what if Snape attacks Lily in a fit of jealousy and she ends up pregnant with Callie? The only thing is i can't work out what she'd tell James, I mean he'd deffinately have killed Snape if he knew the truth. Maybe she went away somewhere to have Callie, then used a time turner afterwards so she could relive the months she missed and James wouldn't have to know anything. Sorry, think I've read a similar thing before and am getting carried away. Oh and nice situation with Harry, why on earth didn't she just tell him? Although i doubt I'd ever have the guts to tell him either if it were me. Please update again soon, i love reading this fic, it's a really original approach, learning about Lily through her diary, it means we hear more about her than if we just observed her life.
Author's Response: It will all be clear soon enough...well, within the next few chapters, at least. =] I'm glad you like it; I'm really enjoying writing it. Thanks for your review!
I love this story, and enjoy the updates. Keep it up.
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Very good, i really liked it.
Please keep writing more
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Wow. This story is really good. Keep up the good work.
Update soon, I really like this story.
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm just fine-tuning the next chapter; I should be submitting it shortly. Thanks for your review.
Still keeping us guessing, I see. :) Now you'll surprise us with the next chapter, where Lily leaves her readers slightly nauseated with the confession that she got very drunk on Firewhiskey that someone smuggled into the dorms and thinks she may have done something very foolish with Peter Pettigrew. ; )
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This story is cool. Kind of like a mystery!
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YAY FOR UPDATES!!!!!!
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OOOOO, finally it looks like we'll get some answers. Are the next few chapters going to be extracts from Lily's diary? Is she going to tell Harry or wait until she's discovered her own story first? What if whatever Lily's left in that diary makes her think it better not to tell Harry? And how come Lily left the diary there? did she want to forget about what had happened to her and move on? And was her hiding it in such an obviously muggle fashion due to her being muggle born? I mean like fetching something instead of summoning it, as often happens in the books. Sorry for getting of track, I love this fic and can't wait to read more and find out about Lily's secrets. So please update again ASAP.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, you'll be seeing some of Lily's entries in the next few chapters--that's the only thing I can answer without giving a lot away =P I'm glad you like it; the next chapter should hopefully be validated soon.
