Reviews For Finding Lily
Reviewer: satina
Date: 11/15/08 12:50
Chapter: Chapter 11

Hey, you remembered the story!!! OK, OK , I'm sorry... Still so glad you up dated at last! Anyway it was a fabulous chapter!

Author's Response: hahah thanks...the next chapter should be posted within the next couple of days =]

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 11/15/08 9:04
Chapter: Chapter 11

Yippie, a new chapter! But poor Lily, stuck between her old best friend and the guy she loves. Poor girl.

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: inspirations
Date: 11/14/08 11:33
Chapter: Chapter 11

Yay! You've updated. This was one of the first stories I read on MNFF, and now you've come back to it. *smiles* This was a great chapter. It gave us a nice insight into Callie's life (I hope to see more of Nina, I don't like her, but she seems interesting) and we are updated on Lily's life too. Which is ten times worse than Callie's. Poor Sev!

Author's Response: hehe thanks so much =]

Reviewer: honey bon
Date: 11/14/08 0:32
Chapter: Chapter 11

This is so sad! T_T poor lily..

Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 07/15/08 7:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Please, oh please, don't drop this story, we want to know what Callie finds out next, and how Harry deals with the new revelations!

Author's Response: I won't! I'm suffering from severe writer's block in regards to this story, and I've just been away for a month. I promise I'll try to get the next chapter up soon =]

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 05/29/08 5:51
Chapter: Chapter 10


I feel sorry for Lily, I really do! Oh well, I can't do anything about it, your story.

Keep up the good work,

~ Parchment and Quill 

Author's Response: Thanks =]

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/28/08 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 10

You know, no matter how many updates you send, you always leave me wanting more. This was an excellent chapter, I particularaly liked how you showed Lily's hopes for the future, it was so reminiscent of how I and probably most girls feel at that age. I also liked the Callie's feeling that it was like reading some sort of perverse bedtime story, how many of us get to a place in a book that we feel shocked or saddened or horrified by but just can't stop reading? Is it because we need to know whether things get better, or is it to see how much worse everything can be? Anyway, this fic just gets better and better and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much =]

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 05/27/08 22:28
Chapter: Chapter 10

Wow! I have to comment that the same thing happens in real life too.
It is sad that Lily and Severus had unprotected sex. It will be interesting when she tells severus, but how will she explain this to James?
And then there's Harry to consider.
A very sad story. It is a shame that both of Callie's parents are dead.
I feel sorry for her and for Lily's predictament too.
Good luck with the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: gryffindorboi
Date: 05/27/08 10:46
Chapter: Chapter 10

AAAHHH! I can only imagine dear old Severus' reaction. Hope to read it soon! Great chapter. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dobbylover
Date: 05/26/08 21:30
Chapter: Chapter 10

Oooh! Oh no! Poor Lily!! I really like this fic!

Author's Response: Thanks! =]

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 05/26/08 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 10

Poor Lily. I feel really sorry for her. Good sotry, even if it is sad. But I would kinda like to get to know Callie a little better. This story is about her more than it is about Lily. Give her a boyfriend or something. Lily is a round character, but I want Callie to have some character too. I love the story, but those are my opinions (of which I have to many).

Author's Response: Yeah, I realize I have been focusing a lot on Lily--I'm trying to make the next few chapters more about Callie. And I actually had a boyfriend for Callie in an earlier draft, but I edited him out because he didn't really add anything to the story =P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 10

ZO...M...F...G...THAT'S SOOOOOO GOOD OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST!!!!!!!

Author's Response: haha thanks!

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 05/19/08 16:14
Chapter: Chapter 8

oh jeez...this makes things interesting...

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 05/19/08 16:13
Chapter: Chapter 7

James and Lily are so cute =]

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 05/17/08 21:04
Chapter: Chapter 9

Poor Carrie! She's got into quite a pickle, with all of the information she's discovered in Lily's diary.
Knowing that Snape is her father is quite the dilemma between her and Harry.
It will be interesting to see how things play out.
Wonderful chapter! I enjoy reading this story, alot and I am curous as to how things will wind up for Carrie.
The happiest of endings would be for her to meet her birth parents, but since both are dead, there will have to be another ending.
On a side note, I find it really wonderful to think that wizard babies can walk earlier than muggle babies.
Of course, that makes more stress for the mom...Marlaina has her hands full with those triplets! :-0

Author's Response: Haha, I love writing the parts with Marlaina; they're so much fun =P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 05/17/08 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 9

Wow (I think I've said that before) that was amazing. No, really!

Just, could you update soon. Please? Pretty please with cherry's on top?

Snape being her father. Slightly gross....? 

Oh well... Keep up the good work!


~ Parchment and Quill 

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try to update soon =]

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/17/08 13:11
Chapter: Chapter 9

Oh my God! Can you just imagine for one moment how she feels? I mean nobody's questioning Snape's bravery during the war, but he was a git after all is said and done. No wonder he was so bitter. I guess she's not going to tell Harry about her new discovery, although he's probably sitting pondering over the whole situation is his office and will eventually start to wonder for himself who his mother had a relationship with before she married his father. Oh dear what a mess. Are lives ever smooth sailing?

Author's Response: Ahh I know...the more of this story I write, the more I'm glad I'm not Callie. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 05/17/08 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 9

*whistles* that is crazy...i can't wait to see what happens when Lily finds will let us see that entry rite? PLEASE!

Author's Response: hehe you'll have to wait and see =P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 05/17/08 11:02
Chapter: Chapter 9

I love this story. I;m knda glad Snape's her father and not James; it's less predictable. Thanks for the quick update!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter might take a little longer since I'm super busy right now, but I'll hopefully be adding it within the next week =]

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 05/17/08 10:11
Chapter: Chapter 9

Woah...still,...woah. SNAPE!!!

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