Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 09/01/08 14:37
Chapter: Prologue: I've Got Dreams to Remember

Love the story so far. I really look forward to reading the rest, for there are so many possible outcomes, I really don't know where you are going to go with the story! Great work :)

Reviewer: Pondering
Date: 04/09/08 5:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: A White Christmas Is Only The Beginning

Yay! The chapter got validated. *hugs* I can't wait to read more--good job with working Mrs Black's character. It feels better now. :D

Hope to hear more from you soon! (: (I should have your next chapter back in the next two days.

Author's Response: -jumps up and down- Heehee. Thanks! And thank god about Mrs. Black's characterization - I didn't really think Mrs Black would be a hard(er) character to write, until you pointed that out, but I'm very glad :DrnAnd take your time! I'm in no rush. rnThanks a bunch agaiN! You're totally awesome.

Reviewer: Mser22
Date: 04/07/08 9:16
Chapter: Chapter 2: A White Christmas Is Only The Beginning

this is such a good story. the suspense feels likes it is building since we all know what happens to Regulus.
how did you come up with the story? just wondering.
again great job with the story, glad you kept your sight on this one!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! And yse, while this story WAS written pre-deahtly hallows, I'm TRYING to incorporate the whole R.A.B. thing in, but since I had this story completely planned months before DH came out, it's proving to be a challenge - hence the 'DH Disregarded' warning. How I thought of the story!? Oh, gosh, I think I had just really wanted to write a Marauder-era story focusing on an original character, and this kind of slowly came to mind.

Reviewer: mugglespy11
Date: 02/15/08 0:06
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Truth Doesn’t Make A Noise

yes, something new.
keep writing
i enjoyed the first chapters

Author's Response: Thank you :) And I fully intend to keep writing, but until the Mods give the green light to send in new chapters ... well I wont be able to update with a new chapter heehee. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Pondering
Date: 01/14/08 2:21
Chapter: Prologue: I've Got Dreams to Remember

Gah. Didn't see this had gotten validated yet. *squishes*

I'm really intrigued by Adelaide's character--I think you've done a very good job with her. I like how that she is encouraging her daughter to do the wrong things and how Adelaide is trying to reassure herself that it is the right thing.

Good job! :)

--Tash

Author's Response: You know for some reason, I acctually do enjoy writing Adelaide's character, which is rather weird. Why, because I hate writing characters that give me trouble (I do admit that a few times I've wanted to bang my head while writing Adelaide), but so far it's been good. Hopefully I can keep her characterization in tact for the rest of the story, and not have her go off of the deep end and turn her into some old Mary Sue. LOL. Thanks for the comment, hun. Means a lot. :)

Reviewer: author_in_pink
Date: 01/06/08 14:34
Chapter: Prologue: I've Got Dreams to Remember

Wow, that was incredible! This story is awesome! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll try.

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