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Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 01/12/09 9:34 · For: Where We Belong
Overall I really enjoyed the story although I admit I was shocked when you killed Alduin off way back when. I think in retrospect a little foreshadowing was needed at least about him being the son of death eaters or that he had a past to hide. (It may already be there, in which case it either went over my head or I forgot it). I liked how you were able to have Alduin and Myrtle move on.

I also thought that the Auror's position of not knowing how to handle explosives to be a little bit non-JKR but that is a somewhat minor thing.

The detective in me was disappointed that we did not get to see what students the sorting hat diverted, however the sorting hat's explanation was acceptable. Good work!

Author's Response: There were some subtle hints about Alduin in Chapters 5 and 7, but they were meant to be apparent only in retrospect, rather than clues you might have picked up on at the time. As for who might have gone to another house, or whether the Sorting Hat was being truthful about sending people where they didn't belong, that's left for you to decide. ;) Thanks for your thoughts!

Name: delirioustk (Signed) · Date: 01/09/09 14:14 · For: Where We Belong
fantastic story! the four firsties are lovable too... :) i enjoyed reading this so much!

Name: delirioustk (Signed) · Date: 01/09/09 10:19 · For: The War Season
love this story! =) best next gen fic i've read so far!

Name: siilly_bookworm_28 (Signed) · Date: 12/29/08 0:19 · For: Slipfang
are they crazy?? after the "zero toleration policy that llewellyn issued?? and neville was really harsh! I was embarrassed and shamed myself!!! very good and convincing writing!!(sorry, my letters aren't seeming to capitalize...)

Name: siilly_bookworm_28 (Signed) · Date: 12/28/08 22:46 · For: The War Season
haha-larious!!! absolutely great!!!!!!!!!!

Name: Osced (Signed) · Date: 12/25/08 19:37 · For: Where We Belong
Great story...very well written

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/14/08 20:21 · For: Where We Belong
I'm really, really hoping you will do a sequel. An entire seven years of Teddy and friends would be more than welcome. One of these days I'm again going to be able to afford the ink and paper so I can print out these chapters and reread them as I do the HP series. I can only fantasize about having another 7 book series to read over and over again as I have the original HP series. Thank you for all your hard work in making this story so enjoyable.

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/14/08 19:00 · For: Child of a Death Eater
Mindboggling, magnificent

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/14/08 14:50 · For: Things Blow Up
I wish this could be published.

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/14/08 13:43 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
I keep repeating myself, but this is such an incredible story. You have captured JKR's style so well I can picture everything the same way I did when reading the HP series.

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/14/08 0:24 · For: When the War Came to Hogwarts
Very interesting

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/13/08 23:44 · For: Generations
Inspirational to say the least. I will say again. This is written in the JKR mode and is the best story I have read on MNFF.

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/13/08 22:57 · For: Scars

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/13/08 21:47 · For: It's All Fun and Games Until Someone Gets Hurt
Incredible story

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/13/08 21:23 · For: Valentine's Day
This is such a JKR story. You've captured her style. This is most definitely the best written story I've read.

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/13/08 0:37 · For: Slipfang
Betterer and Betterer.

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/13/08 0:15 · For: Ophilia's Lesson

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/13/08 0:00 · For: The Zero Toleration Policy
You've done an excellent job of capturing the style of the HP series

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 23:37 · For: Mischief Management
Another excellent chapter

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/12/08 22:55 · For: The Riot Before Christmas
This story just keeps getting better

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