Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/13/10 10:51
Chapter: The Return of the D.A.

Somehow I think Neville approves a little bit of the current DA. I can see his point though--that he doesn't want the memory of the original DA and those who died dishonored. Teddy's meeting seemed to go very well. I think that they will end up accomplishing something. I feel that the students are entitled to know what's going on--not the minute details but that something is being done. I also feel that all of the expelling of students has gone too far. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/13/10 9:48
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

I loved this chapter. It was interesting that so many people knew about the secret meeting. If I was Teddy I'd be nervous--those who came to the meeting seem to have so many hopes and expectations. I was touched by the discussion between Violet and Mercy. I remember well the scene described at Malfoy Manor when Charity died. Pansy is so evil to tell her seven-year old daughter about something so horrific. I hope Teddy's meeting goes well and he doesn't get into trouble. You know, Harry has no business reprimanding Teddy. Harry got into plenty of trouble himself. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/12/10 13:30
Chapter: Slipfang

I agree that the Montague kid was expelled unfairly if that was the real reason he was expelled. I refuse to feel sorry for the children of Death Eaters though. Obviously, the Death Eater parents weren't thinking of their children when they did some of the things they did, except maybe in some deranged way. Interesting that Teddy may have figured out who the wand thief is. That is quite the mystery at the moment. I will close before I change my mind on what I think about Death Eater kids:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/12/10 12:28
Chapter: Ophilia's Lesson

That was very strange, both on the part of Ophilia and Slughorn. I agree with Kai. Ophilia appears to be "barking" and maybe outright mean, while Slughorn seemed to be trying to get Teddy out of being expelled. Somehow I think Slughorn may still be trying to impress Harry by helping Teddy. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/12/10 11:54
Chapter: The Zero Toleration Policy

Oh no--they can't expell Teddy. Harry's got to do something. Actually, better yet, Teddy should find a loophole in the policy. His parents were war heroes and it's not his fault that he was born a metamorphmagus. The great Dumbledore allowed a metamorphmagus and a werewolf attend Hogwarts and Teddy wasn't going to harm someone else. He even diluted it so it would be less dangerous. I can't wait to see what happens. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/09/10 13:22
Chapter: Mischief Management

Actually, I'm more worried about the Marauders' Map being discovered. I hope Teddy has it on his person--although I guess it does look just like a piece of parchment. I think I understand why Violet's name isn't Malfoy--although if family is so important to Draco you'd think he'd give Violet his last name. I'm so glad that Violet got to know Teddy's extended family. I'm always interested in how authors show Harry as a grown-up. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/09/10 12:06
Chapter: The Riot Before Christmas

I was totally charmed that each of the boys had invited Violet home for the holidays. I was kind of hoping that she'd split her time amongst the three. I'm almost getting the feeling that Kai is a little sweet on Violet. I smiled at the letter she wrote to her mother asking permission to stay at Teddy's. I think Violet will learn a lot over the holidays. Her letter showed her Slytherin side. That riot was something else. I wonder what the New Year will bring. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/09/10 10:50
Chapter: Slytherin Qualities

Violet is so thoughtful that it almost seems like she should be in Ravenclaw--and by thoughtful I mean she thinks a lot and thinks things through. It seems like students are trying to live the stereotypes of each of the Houses and not living how they think is best. The problem with that is that now it seems they are questioning even what the stereotypes are. Great chapter and very thought provoking. I love how you portray the Hat. It seems more human than usual and very fierce. No one wants to argue with it.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/09/10 9:21
Chapter: The War Season

I almost forgot that Teddy was a metamorphmagus. I'm sure his changing hair color really startled his friends. I can't believe Chloe set Violet up. That was very mean and not even Slytherin-like--and certainly un-Gryffindor like. The Quidditch game sounded pretty awful. I don't think even Harry had ever been through something like that. I don't think I'll ever figure Slughorn out--he's such a character. I was charmed by Teddy's efforts to see Violet. Ind the end it worked, as crazy as it was. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/08/10 15:33
Chapter: Violet's Birthday

Poor Violet. Don't people know she's a Malfoy--I wouldn't want Daddy or Grandpa to get involved--although I still sense something is weird in her relationship with her Dad's side of the family. I hope the 3 boys don't get into trouble. After all, Teddy was trying to be nice and give her a birthday party. Teddy was so brave talking to the Slytherin girls. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/08/10 14:08
Chapter: Stolen Wands

Of all things to happen to Nagaeena. I think most people with long hair would shriek if they all of a sudden lost their hair. It's so charming that Teddy and Dewey are still escorting Violet. Teddy's a gentleman like his father:D I hate to say it but the first thing I thought when Stephen got his wand stolen was that it was done just to show that Slytherins lost their wands too. The part about Mrs. Norris was kind of funny--especially when the boys realized it was Filch's cat. Those two Slytherin prefects are pretty scary. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/08/10 13:23
Chapter: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity

That Teddy is such a sweetheart. I just went "Awww" when he said he and the other boys would start walking Violet to class. If you ask me, that's a really low blow to bring up either Cho or Cedric to their younger siblings. And, wasn't Cho a seeker for Ravenclaw--she had to know how to ride a broom really well. Don't these goofy kids realize how much everyone went through so they could live in a more peaceful world. I think what shocked me was that there were older Gryffindors picking on Violet--then I was reminded of how the Marauders picked on Severus. Even though they were heros, that wasn't nice. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/08/10 10:58
Chapter: The Sorting Hat's Decree

It's strange to think that the Sorting Hat has so much power but when you think about it that is how people identify themselves at Hogwarts and in their lives after school. It will be very interesting to see what happens at the end of the year. Will the firsties allow themselves to be what the Hat thinks they are now or will they be who they're really supposed to be. I wonder why Violet doesn't have the Malfoy last name. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/07/10 15:16
Chapter: War Wounds

I really don't like snakes and don't think I'd stick my hand into the middle of a bunch of them. I agree with Violet--I don't think Salazar Slytherin would waste his time on anything as mundane as assigning room mates. It seems that each of our four students has distinguished him or herself well on their first night in their new Houses. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/07/10 13:31
Chapter: The Sorting

Well, that was very interesting. It's always fun to see who the professors are after all this time. When you had the Hat sort the students into the Houses they thought they'd be sorted into I thought well, that's not too exciting. Then when you had the Hat sing its song and threaten to never sort again and, furthermore, that it sorted some students where they weren't supposed to be, things got absolutely fascinating. And, I usually skip right over the Hat's song. Another part I really liked was when one of the students, Dewey I think, felt sorry for the Hat and all that it had seen. Great chapter. I can't wait to see if the students stay where they were sorted and if the four stay friends.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/07/10 12:39
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

That answered one of my questions. I keep forgetting that Andromeda and Narcissa are sisters and that the Malfoys are related to the Lupins. I loved how this chapter ended with the four firsties agreeing through a pact that they would be friends no matter what. It was wonderful that Dewey basically said "let the past be the past." Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/07/10 12:21
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

I decided to start reading this although it was a hard choice between this and your third Alexandra Quick book. Already I'm entranced. I take it Cho's father remarried--I wonder who. Is Draco Violet's father? I can't wait to find out. I loved how you described each of the four students getting on the train. It sounded like more than Teddy were "orphans" in one sense or another. I'm always excited to see how different authors describe our favorite characters as adults. Once again I feel a bit sorry for Pansy--she's always described as pug-faced and overweight. I always wonder at how they advertised for the actress to play Pansy--yet in the movie she's not unattractive. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 02/11/10 16:52
Chapter: Where We Belong

this story was absolutely lovely!!!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/29/10 15:49
Chapter: Where We Belong

One last thing, it woudl be intersting to see how ophelia calles in that favor with teddy. I really do hope you write a sequal

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/29/10 15:45
Chapter: Where We Belong

Hey ok so appologies for not reviewing earlier on, no real excuse. This story ws brilliant. You mademe cry, laugh, cring and sqweel. You should be very proud, this isn't an easy story to write and you did a magnificent job at it. you characters are believable, teh plot is plausible but not broing, and while you stay true to all teh cannon you still managed to creat your own unique story. Quite an acomplishment. This is by far one of my favorites. i recomend it to anyoen who likes adventure, frienship, hardships and a little rebelion. I can't wait to read some of your other stories. My hat goes off to you.

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