Reviewer: Ms_Malfoy89
Date: 01/20/08 15:49
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

omg! thts soo cool they are all gonna be friends....are their parents gonna find out?!?! lol love the story so far

Reviewer: Ravencorgi
Date: 01/18/08 17:13
Chapter: The Sorting

Ooh, intriguing. Verrry intriguing. And very original, too. I love the way you’ve blended the familiar – Slughorn, the castle, Peeves – with the unfamiliar – Teddy’s foreboding, and the hat’s strange attitude – to convey an overall sense of something not quite right. It fits perfectly with the story line. You also do a great job detailing the characters and their thoughts and emotions. Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 01/15/08 22:52
Chapter: The Sorting

Messing with the Sorting. That takes some nerve - I love it. I feel the most interesting fics are ones that take events we all know have or will happen (like Teddy going to Hogwarts) and making them original. Bravo! I shall be very interested to see how this plays out. Superb job!

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 01/15/08 5:24
Chapter: The Sorting

That was so cool!!!!

Love the last line of the song. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 01/15/08 5:24
Chapter: The Sorting

That was so cool!!!!

Love the last line of the song. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lunalovegood97
Date: 01/14/08 17:47
Chapter: The Sorting

That was very well written. And a big cliffie at the end!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 01/13/08 15:44
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

good chapter!! it's interesting that violet and teddy are second cousins... update sooooon!!

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 01/13/08 11:29
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

Oooo this story is interesting, I can't wait for another update =) Great story =)

Reviewer: Chalondra
Date: 01/13/08 10:15
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

Wow i'm surprised this turned out well!
keep going!

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 01/09/08 15:18
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Great Story, you created manny interesting characters, keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 01/09/08 15:18
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Great Story, you created manny interesting characters, keep up the great work!

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 01/07/08 3:35
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

very VERY interesting concept ya!! i'd be followin this one for sure
loved how harry was .... just the way i had imagined him to be!! after a life he's had..... he ought to be like dat!
n pancy was pregnant at the war.... now DAT was unexpected... though i dont c how she can b pear shaped... as neither of her parents were.... she is draco's rite?..... oh hold on.... she cant be!! crabbe or goyle maybe huh?

Author's Response: I think you're confusing Pansy and Violet. Pansy's parents were never described in the books. Violet isn't pear-shaped. As for who Violet's father is, if it's not clear enough yet, it should be obvious by the next chapter (which is in the queue now). Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 01/06/08 20:08
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Good story1 i liked how you went from character to character! who's pansy's husband??

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 01/06/08 13:47
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

This is awesome, and it is clear you know how to write well.

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 01/06/08 13:13
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Great beginning! It looks like you've got a good group of kids to work with. I look forward to seeing what happens to all of them. Update soon!

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