Ooh, intriguing. Verrry intriguing. And very original, too. I love the way you’ve blended the familiar – Slughorn, the castle, Peeves – with the unfamiliar – Teddy’s foreboding, and the hat’s strange attitude – to convey an overall sense of something not quite right. It fits perfectly with the story line. You also do a great job detailing the characters and their thoughts and emotions. Looking forward to reading more!
Messing with the Sorting. That takes some nerve - I love it. I feel the most interesting fics are ones that take events we all know have or will happen (like Teddy going to Hogwarts) and making them original. Bravo! I shall be very interested to see how this plays out. Superb job!
That was so cool!!!!
Love the last line of the song. Can't wait for the next chapter!
That was so cool!!!!
Love the last line of the song. Can't wait for the next chapter!
That was very well written. And a big cliffie at the end!
good chapter!! it's interesting that violet and teddy are second cousins... update sooooon!!
Oooo this story is interesting, I can't wait for another update =) Great story =)
Wow i'm surprised this turned out well!
keep going!
Great Story, you created manny interesting characters, keep up the great work!
Great Story, you created manny interesting characters, keep up the great work!
very VERY interesting concept ya!! i'd be followin this one for sure
loved how harry was .... just the way i had imagined him to be!! after a life he's had..... he ought to be like dat!
n pancy was pregnant at the war.... now DAT was unexpected... though i dont c how she can b pear shaped... as neither of her parents were.... she is draco's rite?..... oh hold on.... she cant be!! crabbe or goyle maybe huh?
Author's Response: I think you're confusing Pansy and Violet. Pansy's parents were never described in the books. Violet isn't pear-shaped. As for who Violet's father is, if it's not clear enough yet, it should be obvious by the next chapter (which is in the queue now). Thanks for the review!
Good story1 i liked how you went from character to character! who's pansy's husband??
This is awesome, and it is clear you know how to write well.
Great beginning! It looks like you've got a good group of kids to work with. I look forward to seeing what happens to all of them. Update soon!
