Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 05/22/08 4:48
Chapter: Violet's Birthday

This is soooo interesting! Can't think of any criticisms, it's so good!
So, what happens next?

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 05/22/08 3:16
Chapter: War Wounds

I was always under the impression that both Gryffindor dorms led upstairs.
The sculpture is certainly an interesting idea.

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 05/21/08 20:12
Chapter: Violet's Birthday

O No! I can;t believe that Violet would think Teddy and the others did it! That is so terrible. I can't believe people (even fictional people) can be so evil and predjudice. I'm glad my that nothing like this has ever happend to anyone at my school. Please hurry with the next chapter, i really love this story!
-beaternumber1

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 05/21/08 17:31
Chapter: Violet's Birthday

Wow! This was an intense chapter...poor Violet! This story has always been entertaining but in the last few chapters you have really made it great. Thanks so much for writing this!

Reviewer: shooting_star42
Date: 05/11/08 20:45
Chapter: Stolen Wands

That was awesome! I love this story so far, but this is my favorite chapter! Violet's last line was great XD great job!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/11/08 13:51
Chapter: Stolen Wands

is this a cliffie? Wands disappearing? This sounds serious. Please update!

Author's Response: There are plenty more chapters already written! Updates will occur as soon as they clear the moderation queue. Thanks!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/11/08 13:51
Chapter: Stolen Wands

is this a cliffie? Wands disappearing? This sounds serious. Please update!

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 05/11/08 12:42
Chapter: Stolen Wands

Oh my gosh this was a great chapter! The plot is really thickening, i wonder who is stealing the wands! Great Job.

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 05/11/08 10:57
Chapter: Stolen Wands

:D well written, and the hair removale jinx well, that was a stoke of genius.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/11/08 9:32
Chapter: Stolen Wands

Oooo, Interesting cliffie!! Sounds like things are getting crazy at Hogwarts, Great chapter :-)

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 05/03/08 13:18
Chapter: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity

AHHH!!!!! How could you stop, jk but please, please, please update soon. This is one of my favorite stories on fanfiction!

Reviewer: tc015
Date: 04/27/08 17:15
Chapter: The Sorting

Wow. This chapter was a surprise.

It's interesting that being in Hogwarts made him think of his parents. Because he never knew them, Teddy probably never thought about their death too much. The impact of being in the place where they died seems to affect him a lot. Their deaths seem much more real now.

It's interesting that each of the four got sorted into the house they were pre-destined for. I'm not sure what to think of that. Part of me wishes this didn't happen. It seems too neat. They really don't seem the houses they were sorted for. But they were so determined to fit their family's expectations that the Sorting Hat ended up putting them there.

Speaking of the Sorting Hat, I was really surprised. I didn't expect the Sorting to be eliminated completely. It seems like an odd time to stop it. Maybe right after the war or something, but now it seems sudden. I love the song though. It's very interesting to see the Hat's view on things. I'm pretty that he's talking about the four of them at the end when he mentions sorting people where they don't belong. It seems odd for the Hat to admit it made a mistake or to even have committed the mistake in the first place.

I'm not sure what I think of this chapter. It's really surprising. I can't wait to see what happens now.

~ Teresa

Reviewer: tc015
Date: 04/27/08 16:57
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

I love this chapter. In it, we really get to see each of their personalties come out.

I love how Violet just sits there and reads while the boys talk. She seems like a quiet person who doesn't like to talk too much. She's seems cold at first, and outside of the group. I love her sarcasm; she seems to be more mature than the other three. Maybe it’s because she’s a girl and girls mature faster.

I really liked how Dewey and Teddy shared their food with Violet. Both of them are really good natured, friendly people, and it shows. They really want Violet to be a part of their groups. It's interesting that Kai didn't share though.

Kai is very interesting. He teases Violet a little more than the other two. The only thing I’d like to see a little more depth to him. The only I get from him now is that he like poking fun at people, particularly girls. For some reason, I see him as a Slytherin or a Gryffindor.

I love how each just wants to forget their parents' past. They want to be normal kids, and they resent being labeled as their parent's clone. Because they have this common, this makes them good friends. Even though they’re so different, they have a similar goal.

I can't wait to see their sorting, and where they all end up. I think Teddy’s a Hufflepuff because of kindness. Dewey might be a Gryffindor because I think it would do a lot for his confidence, and he had potential to do great things. Kai’s a Slytherin because he seems cunning, and tends to be a selfish. Violet might be Ravenclaw because she’s smart and likes to read. Hopefully, I’ll be surprised and happy no matter what.

~ Teresa

Reviewer: tc015
Date: 04/27/08 16:35
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Good start. It caught my attention, and I really want to read more.

Teddy seems very cute. I love that Harry dropped him off at Platform 9 and 3/4 with Andromeda. Harry would care a lot for his godson, and it's nice to see him there for his first day at school. I wish I could have seen a little bit more about Teddy though. I would have like to have known his thoughts on Hogwarts and having a famous godfather.

Kai is a very interesting character. I love how he teases Cho; he's like most younger annoying brother. It's interesting to read about his relationship with his sister. Cho's more of a mother to him than a sister; she's twenty years older than him after all. Kai's an interesting character, though I don't see him as much of a Ravenclaw for some reason. I can't wait to read more about him.

I really love Dewey; he's my favorite so far. It's interesting that the Diggory's had another child; I always thought that Cedric would be their one and only son. His insecurity, how he wants to be accepted by his parents as Dewey and not Cedric's little brother, makes him so lovable. You just want to give him a hug. I really can't wait to see how he devolps.

Violet's an interesting character; I really want to know more about his past. Out of all the others, she has had the worst past. I'm guessing her father was a Slytherin: maybe Draco? I'd really like to know more about her personality, though. There's so much to Violet's past that Violet herself gets overshadowed.

Overall, it's a really great start. You have some interesting characters to work with, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

~ Teresa

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 04/18/08 13:49
Chapter: The Sorting Hat's Decree

Alot of characters to keep track of! It does appear that your four students whether or not they were sorted incorrectly have it with in them to unite the houses.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 04/18/08 13:21
Chapter: The Sorting

This is a very interesting premise. Are the four sorted correctly or not?

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 04/18/08 12:56
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

I think it is a very interesting twist that Harry's kids aren't in the story and that you have taken the trouble to make up your own characters for this story.

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 04/17/08 21:53
Chapter: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity

I'm loving this story. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: shooting_star42
Date: 04/17/08 19:19
Chapter: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity

o_O this is insanely good. I just want you to know that. When I was reading it, I totally forgot it was a fanfic; it belongs in a harry potter book. Totally awesome!

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 04/17/08 17:10
Chapter: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity

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