Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 06/30/08 16:46
Chapter: The Riot Before Christmas

i really like that all three invited her! Seems really true to her that she would tear up a little but try not to show it. Last paragraph speaks to the entire story

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 06/30/08 15:46
Chapter: The Riot Before Christmas

wow, this story keeps getting more exciting! i wonder who the thief actually is? how will violet's Christmas with teddy go? keep writing!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 06/29/08 19:13
Chapter: Slytherin Qualities

i love seeing Neville acting like a tough guy, he's the man. this is a very good story keep up the good work!!!!!

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 06/29/08 15:45
Chapter: Slytherin Qualities

This was a very interesting chapter. It really showed us a little more about Violet. I am beginning to think that the sorting hat didn't really put any student in a place that they didn't belong. It just put them in a house where certain atrebutes could develope. I think that Teddy is good and by being in gryfindor he is becoming braver as he tries to live up to all his expectations. I think that Violet could be in Ravenclaw because she thinks about things so throughly. She could be in Gryfindor because she can stand up for what she believes in. She could be in Huflepuff because she is a hard worker. Or she could be in Slytherin because she has determination and she is a leader.

I can'tait to read the next chapter!
- beaternumber1

Reviewer: lolage
Date: 06/25/08 4:50
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Cool chapter

I cant wait for chapter 10.

This is the best story ive seen on this site.

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 06/24/08 18:35
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

pretty interesting....lots of points for all of them to think about and poor Stepen!! Like the crushes and mention of red caps

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 06/24/08 14:49
Chapter: The Riot Before Christmas

i really enjoyed this chapter. its very refreshing to see the characters qualities a lot more in depth, especially non gryffindors. violet is quickly becoming my favorite slytherin, even if she is that horrid pansy's daughter. keep up the good work! :)

Reviewer: fishwithwand
Date: 06/23/08 23:14
Chapter: The Sorting

the song was amazing, I'm like in awe!

Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream
Date: 06/23/08 23:01
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Excellent start; quite remarkably well done.

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 06/21/08 12:06
Chapter: The War Season

I think that this is my favorite chapter so far! I absolutly love it! Please hurry with the next chapter!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 06/20/08 14:32
Chapter: The War Season

Teddy is a pretty good kid not too bright, but kinda like harry in that way. good story though i love the way you write them all nicely rounded. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 06/20/08 13:09
Chapter: The War Season

Fantastic chapter! The Quidditch match was gruesome, but appropriately so. Chloe surprised me, but looking back, there were some hints to the fact that she's not as innocent and overwhelmed as she first appears. And I love Teddy! He came off a little naive in the beginning, again, appropriately so, but it's good to see him showing some real guts, even if he is being a complete idiot. I don't think you are, but I really hope your not setting up a Teddy/Violet romance. I mean, it's your fic, you can do what you like, but that just seems too weird to me. But it does seem like your only intending them to be friends, which is good. The title of Ophilia's book made me laugh out loud, by the way. It's just so perfect! Anyway, I love this chapter and this fic, so please update soon!

Reviewer: lolage
Date: 06/16/08 5:28
Chapter: The War Season

This is a really good story :D

Cant wait for chapter 10!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 06/12/08 23:36
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

youre doing a really good job! although sometimes yr canon is a bit off tho it seems... but clever premise and i like the way its developing. i also like that yr choice of characters are not the obvious ones. updte soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I update as often as chapters are validated. Please let me know what canon errors you find, since for the most part, I try to stick to canon as much as possible. (Obviously, I need to take a few liberties here and there.)

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 06/09/08 16:14
Chapter: The War Season

im really enjoying this. please update soon!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 06/09/08 13:46
Chapter: The War Season

Yes Teddy is an idiot. Amusing end.

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 05/26/08 3:37
Chapter: Violet's Birthday

Please write more soon. Please?

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 05/23/08 18:41
Chapter: Violet's Birthday

Now this is a cliff hanger.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 05/23/08 18:24
Chapter: Stolen Wands

I love Violet's critique of Teddy helping Chloe with her homework. It makes one think that Chloe might be misplaced even if she is muggleborn.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 05/23/08 18:06
Chapter: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity

While waiting for chapter 7 to come up, I did a reread to see if clues were left as to who might be in the wrong house and where they might be.

What is good about this story is that there is no obvious place where they should be. None of the characters seem content that they are in the right house. They feel somehow disappointed. Teddy who stands up for Violet certainly shows courage and valor. Kai who was clever enough to answer the Ravenclaw riddle thinks that studying isn't as exciting as being in the battle of Hogwarts. He seems to be a candidate for either Slytherin (because he thought of a way to win house points)or Gryffindor. Dewey who seems to possess many of the qualities of his brother seems to wonder about some intellectual stuff such as whether the boat is enchanted to hold Hagrid. And Violet is the most interesting of all, a person who is a solitary thinker and not a crowd joiner.

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