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Name: Wolfs_Scream (Signed) · Date: 07/26/08 23:12 · For: Valentine's Day
Excellent.

Yeah, things do tend to "have a great deal more contrast" in one's youth. And the need to "compartmentalize information" tends to be rather less obvious.

I quite liked Harry's letter to Teddy. And Hermione's reaction seems right.

The lads' reaction to the (pink) room of requirement fits, too -- it's well understood (among those of the male persuasion) that pink is quite contagious, after all. :-}

I wonder if the Goblins have managed to "get over" the events surrounding the Trio's break-in (of the LeStrange vault in DH).

Well done!


Name: DMTAT003 (Signed) · Date: 07/26/08 14:59 · For: Valentine's Day
Thank you so much for your latest update to Hogwarts Houses Divided. I really have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to the next update. You have definitely stepped up the action with the goblin rebellion, and I really liked Harry's reaction to Teddy's letter to the Daily Prophet. Thanks again.


Name: gerberb (Signed) · Date: 07/26/08 13:15 · For: Valentine's Day
Thanks, I really like this story.


Name: Wolfs_Scream (Signed) · Date: 07/25/08 8:01 · For: S.C.O.U.R.G.E.
I can't help but wonder if we will get to see the DA's letter some time. :-}

I also wonder how Hermione reacts to S.C.O.U.R.G.E. :-} (Somewhat conflicted, I'd guess.)

Teddy does appear to be getting away with quite a bit, though these things do seem to be pretty minor compared to what Harry & Co. got away with during their Hogwarts tenures.

Very well done.


Name: LunaforGryffindor (Signed) · Date: 07/25/08 5:52 · For: S.C.O.U.R.G.E.
Interesting development. You're really a good writer, both when it comes to advancing the plot and when it's about developing the characters.
I hope you'll continue to update regularly!


Name: DMTAT003 (Signed) · Date: 07/25/08 3:41 · For: S.C.O.U.R.G.E.
Thank you for the update. This is an interesting angle with S.C.O.U.R.G.E., and I want to know what happens with it. The way you described Dewey's confused emotion about girls was simply brilliant, that young man definitely does not have the emotional range of teaspoon. You are an advanced writer and your work shows that in the plot and the word choice used in your writing. Thank you for taking the time to write your fanfiction, and I look forward to the next update.


Name: Wolfs_Scream (Signed) · Date: 07/23/08 22:53 · For: The Return of the D.A.
Well done. It seems that Violet either had a rather greater familiarity with the concept of forgiveness than one might have expected -- or perhaps Mercy did have a positive effect on her. As for Chloe -- yes, there are definitely times that anticipation is worse than what actually happens, and keeping a person in that anticipatory state for a while can be exceedingly stressful. Kinda too bad that she told Teddy what Violet said to her, in some ways, though.

Yeah, I can see how the apparent usurpation of the "DA" moniker might be more than just a bit off-putting for Neville. I wonder what the Potter & Tonks (& Weasley) reactions to the recent activities (& use of the "DA" name) will be.... :-}

Very well done!


Name: rosemerta (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 18:56 · For: The Return of the D.A.
i loved the scene with violet and chloe. i knew violet wouldnt do anything to chloe, because she is rational and fair. but the slow buildup and then speeding up of the drama as they circled was excellent. i also really enjoyed neville's moment of nostalgia to himself and the melancholy note it brought to the end of the story. great transition among so many emotions in one chapter! angst, anger, apprehension, pride, melancholy. except for a few typos, it was perfect! [impatiently waiting for the next.]

Author's Response: Typos? Aieee! (Goes back to proofread again.)


Name: LunaforGryffindor (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 2:52 · For: The Return of the D.A.
The D.A., really! This story gets more interesting with every chapter.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 13:54 · For: The Secret Meeting
Terrific chapter! Really cannot wait to see what happens in the next one!


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 13:51 · For: Slipfang
Oooo, I hope the wand snatcher is caught very soon! Poor kids


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 13:46 · For: Ophilia's Lesson
Very clever class activity, poison flavored water!!! I was torn between horror and laughing my head off! Wonderful job


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 13:41 · For: The Zero Toleration Policy
Hogwarts is certainly a difficult place to be now! Keep up the great writing :-)


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 11:53 · For: Mischief Management
Interesting chapter! Even if the ministry ever gets involved its not like it would really do any good!!!!!! :-P


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 11:48 · For: The Riot Before Christmas
Well you really have to give a round of applause to the Weasley twins, wand alarms, who knows what else will be invented! :-)


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 11:43 · For: Slytherin Qualities
It really makes you wonder just how hard interhouse relations are to make and keep! I cannot get enough of this story :-)


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 11:41 · For: The War Season
I really love these long chapters!!! Excellent chapter


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 07/19/08 11:39 · For: Violet's Birthday
Wow, Drama, drama, drama!!!! Keep up the good work


Name: DMTAT003 (Signed) · Date: 07/16/08 19:18 · For: The Secret Meeting
Thank you again for your update, and I look forward to the next chapter. Your writing is always excellent and it is clear that you are a very talented writer. I really hope that Violent and Chloe can resolve their situation, and I like how you have used Professor Longbottom and Harry Potter in fiction. I really like how you have built upon the maturity of Neville Longbottom.


Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 07/16/08 17:56 · For: The Secret Meeting
it's cool to see everyone getting along after the huge fight.


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