Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 08/30/08 16:41
Chapter: When the War Came to Hogwarts

ahh ahh ahh! ahh!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 08/30/08 11:36
Chapter: When the War Came to Hogwarts

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! another war at hogwarts can't wait to see how it goes please hurry with the next chpater.

Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream
Date: 08/24/08 0:21
Chapter: Generations

Yeah, Andromeda definitely has the benefit of prior experience. :-}

I'm mildly surprised that Teddy appears to know the word "pogrom."

Interesting chat between Prof. Longbottom & Teddy, there.

Well done!

Reviewer: sabradan
Date: 08/22/08 1:46
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

I absolutely love the stpry and characters/relationships you're developing here, it is all so unbelieveably realistic, and for the most part in character, and canon-compliant, while at the same time being a completely new take. I really like how Violet and Teddy are cousins, and good friends as well, and both seemingly care about each other despite the house they were sorted in. Its really quite sweet--and makes for great story advancement, as well. I hope you get the rest up and validated as soon as possible. Consider this favorited, and I want to thank you for helping me get my mind off my own rough patch (where i happen to be stuck on) in my own story. You rock!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 08/21/08 21:28
Chapter: Generations

Yay, you updated! You just made my day. I love how all the D.A. brought muggle stuff to Hogwarts. And Violet, buying a bike! I wonder if they'll end up doing anything with it? Keep writing!

Reviewer: Toptoptop123
Date: 08/21/08 17:35
Chapter: Generations

Wait... how is Victoire Teddy's cousin? Heck, how are *any* of the Weasleys Teddy's cousins? He's not related by blood to any of them; the closest thing is that he's Harry's godson.

Author's Response: Teddy and Victoire actually are fourth cousins, once removed, through Phineas Nigellus Black. But the "cousin" label is really more of an informal one; the Weasleys think of Teddy as a cousin, even if he's only very distantly a blood relation.

Reviewer: dracosnumber1girl
Date: 08/21/08 16:57
Chapter: Generations

This is a really good story! My favorite part is how you made me strongly dislike, if only for a moment, characters I have grown to love (i.e. Neville, Harry, etc.) without making them be crazy unreasonable and making them do things they would REALLY never do. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 08/21/08 15:30
Chapter: Generations

good chapter! i love the ending. i can't wait to see the anniversary memorial service; update soon!

Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 08/21/08 15:14
Chapter: Generations

Your writing is truly amazing. You develop the characters marvelously and all this within the confines of cannon compliance; I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

By the way, for the first few chapters, as we were discovering the main 10 characters, it was quite confusing, and I was initially tempted (around chapter 4) to drop following the story, but I am glad that I didn't; shortly afterwards you got me hooked. I think that a little who-is-who reference page might be useful. After all, inter-house friendships aren't easy to keep track of.

Author's Response:

Yes, there are a lot of characters! I tried not to introduce the whole cast at once, but since I am now very familiar with all of them in my own mind, it may be more difficult for me to see where readers might be getting lost. I actually use a private wiki to keep track of all the characters and class schedules and things. But I can't make it public, because it would contain spoilers! If I write a sequel, though, I may post some sort of roster or cast list. Thanks!

Reviewer: LunaforGryffindor
Date: 08/21/08 4:40
Chapter: Generations

Watch out for the Muggle Artifacts invasion! :-)
Brilliant chapter, I love little Victoire.

Reviewer: gerberb
Date: 08/20/08 23:01
Chapter: Generations

Great chapter. Keep it up.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 08/20/08 22:02
Chapter: Scars

Nice job on showing Violet's fear for Kai's health.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/20/08 17:50
Chapter: Scars

Excellent chapter!!!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/20/08 17:47
Chapter: It's All Fun and Games Until Someone Gets Hurt

Oh wow! What a chapter!!! I loved the part where the house elves were tricked into not working :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/20/08 17:43
Chapter: Valentine's Day

Loved it! :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/20/08 17:42
Chapter: S.C.O.U.R.G.E.

Two thumbs way way up for this chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/20/08 17:40
Chapter: The Return of the D.A.

A lovely long chapter!! Its hard to find enough good words to describe it :-)

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 08/18/08 19:32
Chapter: Scars

This was a realley awesome chapter keep up the good work! : )

Reviewer: LunaforGryffindor
Date: 08/18/08 5:16
Chapter: Scars

This story is truly one of my favourite. Your writing is captivating and I love the complexity of the world you're building. Great job, don't stop!

Reviewer: Toptoptop123
Date: 08/14/08 20:53
Chapter: Scars

While the writing is still good, it seems that you're getting a bit off the "Hogwarts Houses Divided" topic and onto the "zOMG g0blins!!!!1111onoenoneeleven!" topic. ;) But I'm sure you have some more surprise in store that will satisfy me.

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