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Name: sabradan (Signed) · Date: 09/29/08 0:48 · For: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters
I absolutely love this story, love the way you've developed all your characters, especially Teddy and Violet! So great. I also really like Ophilia for some reason.
I really like how this story has become so action-packed and very much more than just what seemed to be on the surface at the beginning, very well done.
Update soon, as now I can't wait for more. I know I may be the only one who thinks this, but I think Ophilia and Teddy would make a cut couple. Who cares about age; its only a number, after all. hint hint. ;)

Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 09/26/08 13:14 · For: Underground
those goblins are in for it now with teddy on there trail and i'm sure harry must be on is way soon too.

Name: Wolfs_Scream (Signed) · Date: 09/26/08 9:03 · For: Underground
No, I reckon Goblins in a seriously bad mood, messing around with Muggle explosives, would probably not be especially high on a list of "things I really want to experience."

And Chloe does seem to have surprised herself, there.

Well done.

Name: Toptoptop123 (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 18:42 · For: Underground
Re crystalphoenix: AMLO is a sort of explosive used in mines.

Name: crystalphoenix (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 18:28 · For: Underground
What's in those bags? whatever it is, it probably could stop the aurors- the goblins had to have some sort of backup plan when they attacked Hogwarts. I'm glad Chloe is finally showing a little bit of courage and initiative. Did the Sorting Hat really misplace anyone, or did it just say it did? Or perhaps its lesson was that really, pretty much anyone can fit into any of the Houses, as long as they make the effort and they have some support from their peers.

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 14:59 · For: The War Season
I love this story!

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 14:46 · For: Violet's Birthday
Violet is/was? my favourite characfer. Now this fic has turned into a whodunnit. Cloying Chloe, Gilbert, I wonder who the baddie is.

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 14:26 · For: Stolen Wands
Great story!

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 14:09 · For: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity
This is a truly fresh new story & it makes for a VERY interesting read. Thank you.

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 13:53 · For: The Sorting Hat's Decree
The plot thickens.

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 13:40 · For: War Wounds
Ophilia Karait, perfect name. This fic gets better & better.

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 11:57 · For: The Sorting
Hats off to the Sorting Hat! What a song!

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 11:32 · For: The Hogwarts Express
Curiouser & curiouser ..

Name: lovelilyjames (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 11:07 · For: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters
Delicious! Act 2, Scene 1.Can't wait to read more!

Name: Kantaka (Signed) · Date: 09/18/08 21:42 · For: Goblins & Elves
Wow!! Simply WOW!!!
Sorry about the most unarticulate review but I'm just speechless. Your story is simply awesome... I can't wait to read the next inqueue 'Underground'. BTW, Ophilia being awake is just unnerving. Her being such a mysterious and powerful Slytherin character and all... I just can't wait. I literally read the 25 chaps you posted so far in three days!! GREAT WORK, honest!

Name: fan_fic_fan (Signed) · Date: 09/15/08 23:27 · For: Goblins & Elves
This chapter had me tenser than most fan fics can manage. I love how the story has blown into an action-packed thrill ride. Lay on, MacDuff! Next, please!

Name: Wolfs_Scream (Signed) · Date: 09/15/08 23:17 · For: Goblins & Elves
Interesting developments; this is certainly one way to see what certain characters are "made of." (Stephen, for example, appears to be a credit to Slytherin.)

Harry & co. will undoubtedly wish to Have Words with Teddy -- assuming all concerned survive.

Well done.

Name: crystalphoenix (Signed) · Date: 09/15/08 18:20 · For: Goblins & Elves
Oh, bravo, Stephen! I'm impressed at his levelheadedness in such a stressful situation. I'm also very happy that he finally has the chance to "play the hero" so to speak. The Sorting Hat's going to give Chloe something, isn't it? But will it be the Sword of Gryffindor, or something else? I can't wait to read more!

Name: beaternumber1 (Signed) · Date: 09/15/08 17:53 · For: Goblins & Elves
YAY! I knew Slytherins were cool even if i hated Draco. I love you rcharacter's especially Violet. She wasn't inthis chapter so much but i can't wait for the next ones. Kai is being really brave going to help those kids like that. If he's in Ravenclaw wouldn't he have thought about a plan alittle more... or am i just being steriotypical? Golly and the other elves can always go and get another job can't they? I really hope Ophilia can help Teddy out, she's a great character. She's Slytheriny, without being evil. I also really liked what Stephen did, i didn't know he had it in him... but i'm glad he did.Anyway great job and hurry with the next chapter!

Name: rayasunshine (Signed) · Date: 09/15/08 12:54 · For: Goblins & Elves
Finally! Wow, this is like a bad version of Hermione's dream, poor hogsmeade!

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