Reviewer: Toptoptop123
Date: 09/25/08 18:42
Chapter: Underground

Re crystalphoenix: AMLO is a sort of explosive used in mines.

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 09/25/08 18:28
Chapter: Underground

What's in those bags? whatever it is, it probably could stop the aurors- the goblins had to have some sort of backup plan when they attacked Hogwarts. I'm glad Chloe is finally showing a little bit of courage and initiative. Did the Sorting Hat really misplace anyone, or did it just say it did? Or perhaps its lesson was that really, pretty much anyone can fit into any of the Houses, as long as they make the effort and they have some support from their peers.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 14:59
Chapter: The War Season

I love this story!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 14:46
Chapter: Violet's Birthday

Violet is/was? my favourite characfer. Now this fic has turned into a whodunnit. Cloying Chloe, Gilbert, I wonder who the baddie is.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 14:26
Chapter: Stolen Wands

Great story!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 14:09
Chapter: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity

This is a truly fresh new story & it makes for a VERY interesting read. Thank you.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 13:53
Chapter: The Sorting Hat's Decree

The plot thickens.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 13:40
Chapter: War Wounds

Ophilia Karait, perfect name. This fic gets better & better.

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 11:57
Chapter: The Sorting

Hats off to the Sorting Hat! What a song!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 11:32
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

Curiouser & curiouser ..

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/25/08 11:07
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

Delicious! Act 2, Scene 1.Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 09/18/08 21:42
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

Wow!! Simply WOW!!!
Sorry about the most unarticulate review but I'm just speechless. Your story is simply awesome... I can't wait to read the next inqueue 'Underground'. BTW, Ophilia being awake is just unnerving. Her being such a mysterious and powerful Slytherin character and all... I just can't wait. I literally read the 25 chaps you posted so far in three days!! GREAT WORK, honest!

Reviewer: fan_fic_fan
Date: 09/15/08 23:27
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

This chapter had me tenser than most fan fics can manage. I love how the story has blown into an action-packed thrill ride. Lay on, MacDuff! Next, please!

Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream
Date: 09/15/08 23:17
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

Interesting developments; this is certainly one way to see what certain characters are "made of." (Stephen, for example, appears to be a credit to Slytherin.)

Harry & co. will undoubtedly wish to Have Words with Teddy -- assuming all concerned survive.

Well done.

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 09/15/08 18:20
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

Oh, bravo, Stephen! I'm impressed at his levelheadedness in such a stressful situation. I'm also very happy that he finally has the chance to "play the hero" so to speak. The Sorting Hat's going to give Chloe something, isn't it? But will it be the Sword of Gryffindor, or something else? I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 09/15/08 17:53
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

YAY! I knew Slytherins were cool even if i hated Draco. I love you rcharacter's especially Violet. She wasn't inthis chapter so much but i can't wait for the next ones. Kai is being really brave going to help those kids like that. If he's in Ravenclaw wouldn't he have thought about a plan alittle more... or am i just being steriotypical? Golly and the other elves can always go and get another job can't they? I really hope Ophilia can help Teddy out, she's a great character. She's Slytheriny, without being evil. I also really liked what Stephen did, i didn't know he had it in him... but i'm glad he did.Anyway great job and hurry with the next chapter!

Reviewer: rayasunshine
Date: 09/15/08 12:54
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

Finally! Wow, this is like a bad version of Hermione's dream, poor hogsmeade!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/15/08 11:41
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

So excellant, can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 09/15/08 11:00
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

ooo Ophilia!! Dd she pretend to be knocked out so she could do something later? And Hogsmeade!!! Ugg this is awful but an amazing story!!

Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 09/15/08 10:33
Chapter: Goblins & Elves

argh! need... more....

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