Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 11/12/08 17:10
Chapter: Things Blow Up

i love how teddy is all brave like harry and remus, well written great story, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 11/12/08 15:15
Chapter: Things Blow Up

Oh my gosh! That was such a great idea! I definently wouldn't have thought of that...... Awww i'm so sad now. :( Alduin is so cool.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Beaternumber1

Reviewer: ThessalyRose
Date: 11/12/08 15:07
Chapter: Things Blow Up

Wow, I have been breathlessly awaiting this chapter, and I wasn't disappointed. This story is such a worthy sequel to JKR's books! I just can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: NOMIKO
Date: 11/10/08 7:54
Chapter: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan

Great chapter! I really wish that Teddy's plan works out in the end. I hope the next chapter gets posted soon. The suspense is nervewracking. Anyway what happenned to Kai? Is he going to appear in the next chapter? We haven't seen him since he got shot in the thigh and I hope he's going to be okay.

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 11/04/08 9:54
Chapter: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan

Need I point to the rather obvious cliffie you've left us with???

My godness!! How can you possibly make such action filled chapters!! It's truly beyond my comprehension. I men after the previous chapter I thought the was no way to outdo yourself, and then comes the Slyhterin's quiet revellion, then the firstie's revellion and details like the marouder's map flitatious nature.

The way you planned that one was mastermind's work, by the way. I noticed you chose to keep Moony, Padfoot, Wormtail and Prongs with the personalities they had when they did the map. Clever, veeery clever. Loved to read about Ophelia blushing, too. I wonder where is that conversation going to led up to. Did the marauders manage to point towards the captives?

Hope Teddy's 'plan' works out!!!

As usual, I really can't wait to read more!!! I'd really like to fast-forward the queue!!!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/03/08 15:59
Chapter: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan

Oh No. just when i thought the situation was turning in their favor.. you are gonna kill someone!! :(

great use of suspense and shifting perspectives to make the same period of time stretch longer and longer. waiting with bated breath...

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 11/03/08 11:43
Chapter: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan

Oh MAN this story is so intense!! Teddy is so brave and wonderful...all of them are! I can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Tim the Enchanter
Date: 11/03/08 11:30
Chapter: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan

Oh dear - let us hope that Teddy's "distraction" doesn't blow up the entire castle!

Thanks for writing such a tense, gripping, and entertaining story - I always get excited when this is updated. With that in mind, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Tim the Enchanter

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 10/21/08 19:56
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

Jeeeshhhh!!! Talk bout cliffie after cliffie! Absolutely love your story and can't wait to read more. I'm ubber thrilled the queue's reopened!!!! *does happy dance*
I hope Teddy/Griprock comes up with a decent plan to keep his limbs in place and blood in circulation, because so far, he's had just the dumbest luck EVER. This humble reader hope that does not change, thought. I am sort of fond of Teddy, reckless as he is and all. Keep the awesome work!! =)

Reviewer: JCCollier
Date: 10/18/08 19:33
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

Breathtaking. A narrow apparation escape, a desperate disguise almost unmasked, someone in imminent danger of beheading, and Hogwarts still on the verge of destruction! How much more suspense can we take?

Well worth the wait and well deserving of its QSQ nomination. 'Houses Divided' has my vote... um, if this were a democracy I mean.

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 10/18/08 19:27
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

every difficult situation you put teddy in .. every time i thought his thoughts would cause him to stumble, falter somehow, make a fatal mistake, you brought him back and i wanted to cheer! great installment yet again. so whats next? ~_^ [SO GLAD QUEUE IS UP AGAIN!]

Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream
Date: 10/18/08 17:11
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

Although her optimism was not well-founded, Violet's (somewhat premature) thoughts about Teddy getting talked into doing something sensible were quite amusing.

As for the AN/FO -- perhaps Banishment? Combined with Shielding charms?

Despite the occasional oddity, Teddy's doing remarkably well at "playing Goblin."

Well done.

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 10/18/08 14:13
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

YAY! I'm so glad this chapter is finally up, i've been waiting forevor! Great job! I can't wait to figure out what happens!

Reviewer: tilli
Date: 10/18/08 13:02
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

sorry, my bad.. the browser kept skipping the last chapter some 3 hours back.. and i was so eagerly waiting for it that this chapter didn make sense without reading that one... its a great story, really keeps me waiting for the next chapter..

Reviewer: tilli
Date: 10/18/08 13:02
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

sorry, my bad.. the browser kept skipping the last chapter some 3 hours back.. and i was so eagerly waiting for it that this chapter didn make sense without reading that one... its a great story, really keeps me waiting for the next chapter..

Reviewer: tilli
Date: 10/18/08 13:01
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

sorry, my bad.. the browser kept skipping the last chapter some 3 hours back.. and i was so eagerly waiting for it that this chapter didn make sense without reading that one... its a great story, really keeps me waiting for the next chapter..

Reviewer: tilli
Date: 10/18/08 9:52
Chapter: Who's Going to Rescue Us?

hey, is a chapter missing in between underground and who is going to save us? some parts are confusing.. as how u got there..

Author's Response: No, I don't think anything is missing. Are you saying you think there is a gap somewhere?

Reviewer: sabradan
Date: 09/29/08 0:48
Chapter: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

I absolutely love this story, love the way you've developed all your characters, especially Teddy and Violet! So great. I also really like Ophilia for some reason.
I really like how this story has become so action-packed and very much more than just what seemed to be on the surface at the beginning, very well done.
Update soon, as now I can't wait for more. I know I may be the only one who thinks this, but I think Ophilia and Teddy would make a cut couple. Who cares about age; its only a number, after all. hint hint. ;)

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 09/26/08 13:14
Chapter: Underground

those goblins are in for it now with teddy on there trail and i'm sure harry must be on is way soon too.

Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream
Date: 09/26/08 9:03
Chapter: Underground

No, I reckon Goblins in a seriously bad mood, messing around with Muggle explosives, would probably not be especially high on a list of "things I really want to experience."

And Chloe does seem to have surprised herself, there.

Well done.

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