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Name: ahattab33 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 21:42 · For: Things Blow Up
Oh my goodness, each chapter is better than the last!! I love that they are so long...that's kind of a random comment, but there you go.

I really enjoy reading the scenes with the adults, and this chapter featured them a lot. I loved the part where Ron told Ophelia to watch out for Ginny...

Poor Alduin! I can't believe he choose to be a ghost! But I'm so glad he's helping! And I'm SO glad Teddy finally got out...I doubt he's going to rest, though, until the rest of the students are out. Harry would have to physically restrain him. And I hope Chloe and the others are okay...

This is the story I am most looking forward to the update...keep up the excellent terrific work!!


Name: Kantaka (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 19:54 · For: Things Blow Up
Figure Mirlte will be happy, right?

The more I read, The more Rowlingesque your writing becomes. I mean, Alduin coming back as a ghost to help his yearmates... How did you came up with such a BRILLIANT idea!?

Teddy's spur of the moment plan was rather occurent. It's to be congratulated. As it is the highly skilled way in which you described everyone's feeling, thoughts and sensations thoughout the chapter.

I found the exchange between Violet and Draco heartbreaking. The rigid maners, the ASKING for permission to hug her... just too perfect, too cannon-like. And Draco showing up with potions to wake everyone up, that's something perhaps Dumbledore would have thought about. And obviously, our Slytherin Prince, too.

I guess you'll get tired of hearing this (I am feeling a bit monotonous, after all) but with each chapter I get the impression you can't possibly write something more awesome... Then I read the next update, and I learn how completely mistaken I was!!

I do hope you keep doing that!!!!

Cheers!
- C -


Name: Poppy (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 17:33 · For: Things Blow Up
Oh I hope Alduin isn't a ghost forever!! I missed when the Slytherin common room was flood, what chapter was that in??

Author's Response:

Stephen White did that in chapter 25 ("Goblins and Elves"). Thanks for the review!



Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 17:10 · For: Things Blow Up
i love how teddy is all brave like harry and remus, well written great story, keep up the good work.


Name: beaternumber1 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 15:15 · For: Things Blow Up
Oh my gosh! That was such a great idea! I definently wouldn't have thought of that...... Awww i'm so sad now. :( Alduin is so cool.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Beaternumber1


Name: ThessalyRose (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 15:07 · For: Things Blow Up
Wow, I have been breathlessly awaiting this chapter, and I wasn't disappointed. This story is such a worthy sequel to JKR's books! I just can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work.


Name: NOMIKO (Signed) · Date: 11/10/08 7:54 · For: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan
Great chapter! I really wish that Teddy's plan works out in the end. I hope the next chapter gets posted soon. The suspense is nervewracking. Anyway what happenned to Kai? Is he going to appear in the next chapter? We haven't seen him since he got shot in the thigh and I hope he's going to be okay.


Name: Kantaka (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 9:54 · For: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan
Need I point to the rather obvious cliffie you've left us with???

My godness!! How can you possibly make such action filled chapters!! It's truly beyond my comprehension. I men after the previous chapter I thought the was no way to outdo yourself, and then comes the Slyhterin's quiet revellion, then the firstie's revellion and details like the marouder's map flitatious nature.

The way you planned that one was mastermind's work, by the way. I noticed you chose to keep Moony, Padfoot, Wormtail and Prongs with the personalities they had when they did the map. Clever, veeery clever. Loved to read about Ophelia blushing, too. I wonder where is that conversation going to led up to. Did the marauders manage to point towards the captives?

Hope Teddy's 'plan' works out!!!

As usual, I really can't wait to read more!!! I'd really like to fast-forward the queue!!!


Name: rosemerta (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 15:59 · For: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan
Oh No. just when i thought the situation was turning in their favor.. you are gonna kill someone!! :(

great use of suspense and shifting perspectives to make the same period of time stretch longer and longer. waiting with bated breath...


Name: ahattab33 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 11:43 · For: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan
Oh MAN this story is so intense!! Teddy is so brave and wonderful...all of them are! I can't wait for the next update!


Name: Tim the Enchanter (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 11:30 · For: This Doesn't Sound Like a Very Good Plan
Oh dear - let us hope that Teddy's "distraction" doesn't blow up the entire castle!

Thanks for writing such a tense, gripping, and entertaining story - I always get excited when this is updated. With that in mind, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Tim the Enchanter


Name: Kantaka (Signed) · Date: 10/21/08 19:56 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
Jeeeshhhh!!! Talk bout cliffie after cliffie! Absolutely love your story and can't wait to read more. I'm ubber thrilled the queue's reopened!!!! *does happy dance*
I hope Teddy/Griprock comes up with a decent plan to keep his limbs in place and blood in circulation, because so far, he's had just the dumbest luck EVER. This humble reader hope that does not change, thought. I am sort of fond of Teddy, reckless as he is and all. Keep the awesome work!! =)


Name: JCCollier (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 19:33 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
Breathtaking. A narrow apparation escape, a desperate disguise almost unmasked, someone in imminent danger of beheading, and Hogwarts still on the verge of destruction! How much more suspense can we take?

Well worth the wait and well deserving of its QSQ nomination. 'Houses Divided' has my vote... um, if this were a democracy I mean.


Name: rosemerta (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 19:27 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
every difficult situation you put teddy in .. every time i thought his thoughts would cause him to stumble, falter somehow, make a fatal mistake, you brought him back and i wanted to cheer! great installment yet again. so whats next? ~_^ [SO GLAD QUEUE IS UP AGAIN!]


Name: Wolfs_Scream (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 17:11 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
Although her optimism was not well-founded, Violet's (somewhat premature) thoughts about Teddy getting talked into doing something sensible were quite amusing.

As for the AN/FO -- perhaps Banishment? Combined with Shielding charms?

Despite the occasional oddity, Teddy's doing remarkably well at "playing Goblin."

Well done.


Name: beaternumber1 (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 14:13 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
YAY! I'm so glad this chapter is finally up, i've been waiting forevor! Great job! I can't wait to figure out what happens!


Name: tilli (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 13:02 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
sorry, my bad.. the browser kept skipping the last chapter some 3 hours back.. and i was so eagerly waiting for it that this chapter didn make sense without reading that one... its a great story, really keeps me waiting for the next chapter..


Name: tilli (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 13:02 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
sorry, my bad.. the browser kept skipping the last chapter some 3 hours back.. and i was so eagerly waiting for it that this chapter didn make sense without reading that one... its a great story, really keeps me waiting for the next chapter..


Name: tilli (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 13:01 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
sorry, my bad.. the browser kept skipping the last chapter some 3 hours back.. and i was so eagerly waiting for it that this chapter didn make sense without reading that one... its a great story, really keeps me waiting for the next chapter..


Name: tilli (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 9:52 · For: Who's Going to Rescue Us?
hey, is a chapter missing in between underground and who is going to save us? some parts are confusing.. as how u got there..

Author's Response: No, I don't think anything is missing. Are you saying you think there is a gap somewhere?


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