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Reviews For Ardent

Name: canufeelthemagictonight (Signed) · Date: 09/24/11 6:56 · For: Chapter 1
Great job! It's really sweet. I especially love the ending, when they're all sitting together. Keep up the good work!

Name: Solar knight (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 0:13 · For: Chapter 1
wow, what a beautiful piece. Human and nature. Though I don't think Ron should be "the perfect boy", it makes all the fluff a bit unreal.

Name: HereUntilNoneAreLoyal (Signed) · Date: 05/10/11 16:57 · For: Chapter 1
I really liked this! It was so cute!!!! :)

Name: common2222 (Signed) · Date: 02/24/11 11:14 · For: Chapter 1
Totallly awsum!

Name: common2222 (Signed) · Date: 02/24/11 11:14 · For: Chapter 1
Totallly awsum!

Name: harrypottergurl (Signed) · Date: 06/14/10 16:30 · For: Chapter 1
That was a very good story.

Name: CalRH (Signed) · Date: 12/23/09 6:02 · For: Chapter 1
I loved it. This is a brilliant one-shot.

Name: peacesmilepotter (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 11:55 · For: Chapter 1
That was cute! i liked it a lot!

Name: feydude (Signed) · Date: 08/17/09 21:05 · For: Chapter 1
very nice one-shot, hopefully you put your talents to use in longer stories to!
-the fey~

Name: barrytrotterlovesginny (Signed) · Date: 07/31/09 6:32 · For: Chapter 1
smashing! Loved it.

Name: the_aggrivator961 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/09 13:55 · For: Chapter 1
I love it!!!! It goes almost perfectly with what I was thinking about them!!!!

Name: swimmer7 (Signed) · Date: 03/14/09 19:34 · For: Chapter 1
i love it.. and it really made me think how much i love the actual books!

well done!

Name: alyssa_S (Signed) · Date: 10/24/08 2:48 · For: Chapter 1
really great!!

Name: elvendork_luvs_ginny (Signed) · Date: 10/18/08 20:18 · For: Chapter 1
Good story. I like how you included Mr and Mrs Weasley at the end. It tied up the story very nicely

Name: HermyStar (Signed) · Date: 09/12/08 23:23 · For: Chapter 1
This was the fIrst fanfic I ever read. I's the sweetest thing ever.

Name: Adelfore Flamell (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 11:40 · For: Chapter 1
This is really a beautiful one shot. one of the better ones i have read. The emotions are all very well though out and it almost brought a tear to my eye. The only thing that bothers me a bit is the gravity of the situation. I would think the Gravity of Ron's and Ginny's situation would have affected them more then it seemed apparent. This is my opinion however, so do understand that at the same time i do believe this story was constructed to flow very nicely, with just the right amount of fluf and accurate emotion. Well Done!!

Name: pennyfeather (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 15:07 · For: Chapter 1
this was really beautiful
you are a really skilled writer
thank you

Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it =)

Name: DAFFODIL (Signed) · Date: 06/09/08 11:54 · For: Chapter 1

Name: quoth_the_raven (Signed) · Date: 05/20/08 15:46 · For: Chapter 1
I liked it! Pure fluff and rainbows! But that isn't always a bad thing.

Name: Trelawney (Signed) · Date: 04/29/08 2:03 · For: Chapter 1
Great fic just the way I wish the books had ended. However, I found myself being "awoken" from this fic constantly by the wordiness of the text. If you write another simpliciy is sometimes the best way of getting your idea across.

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