Reviews For Ardent
Reviewer: canufeelthemagictonight
Date: 09/24/11 6:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great job! It's really sweet. I especially love the ending, when they're all sitting together. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Solar knight
Date: 09/06/11 0:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, what a beautiful piece. Human and nature. Though I don't think Ron should be "the perfect boy", it makes all the fluff a bit unreal.

Reviewer: HereUntilNoneAreLoyal
Date: 05/10/11 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this! It was so cute!!!! :)

Reviewer: common2222
Date: 02/24/11 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Totallly awsum!

Reviewer: common2222
Date: 02/24/11 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Totallly awsum!

Reviewer: harrypottergurl
Date: 06/14/10 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a very good story.

Reviewer: CalRH
Date: 12/23/09 6:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it. This is a brilliant one-shot.

Reviewer: peacesmilepotter
Date: 11/08/09 11:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was cute! i liked it a lot!

Reviewer: feydude
Date: 08/17/09 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

very nice one-shot, hopefully you put your talents to use in longer stories to!
-the fey~

Reviewer: barrytrotterlovesginny
Date: 07/31/09 6:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

smashing! Loved it.

Reviewer: the_aggrivator961
Date: 07/09/09 13:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it!!!! It goes almost perfectly with what I was thinking about them!!!!

Reviewer: swimmer7
Date: 03/14/09 19:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

i love it.. and it really made me think how much i love the actual books!

well done!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 10/24/08 2:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

really great!!

Reviewer: elvendork_luvs_ginny
Date: 10/18/08 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good story. I like how you included Mr and Mrs Weasley at the end. It tied up the story very nicely

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 09/12/08 23:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was the fIrst fanfic I ever read. I's the sweetest thing ever.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 07/20/08 11:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really a beautiful one shot. one of the better ones i have read. The emotions are all very well though out and it almost brought a tear to my eye. The only thing that bothers me a bit is the gravity of the situation. I would think the Gravity of Ron's and Ginny's situation would have affected them more then it seemed apparent. This is my opinion however, so do understand that at the same time i do believe this story was constructed to flow very nicely, with just the right amount of fluf and accurate emotion. Well Done!!

Reviewer: pennyfeather
Date: 06/12/08 15:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was really beautiful
you are a really skilled writer
thank you

Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it =)

Reviewer: DAFFODIL
Date: 06/09/08 11:54
Chapter: Chapter 1


Reviewer: quoth_the_raven
Date: 05/20/08 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked it! Pure fluff and rainbows! But that isn't always a bad thing.

Reviewer: Trelawney
Date: 04/29/08 2:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great fic just the way I wish the books had ended. However, I found myself being "awoken" from this fic constantly by the wordiness of the text. If you write another simpliciy is sometimes the best way of getting your idea across.

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