looks like a good beginning! keep writing cause i wanna read more!
Loved the part about that boy copying off of Frank Longbottom's O.W.L!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A very good first chapter, can't wait for an update, this is going on my favourites.
your story is ah-mazing so far! please update soon!
your story is ah-mazing so far! please update soon!
Sweet story. it kinda gave me the giggles which definately is a good thing. However, it is a little difficult at the moment seeing as i am in my room pretending to be going to bed and supposedly haveing no reason to giggle. lol oh well. loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it made you laugh... hope you didn't get in trouble! ~megan~
that was great! update....
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying... ~megan~
seems really good so far! i really want to hear more. :) nice work i think you should give more background on the whole james and lily story first though. other than that, its AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait to write more- not sure when I'll get to it though. Hopefully soon. I'm planning on explaining the James/Lily relationship more in the next few chapters; I even confused myself with it, but I think Lily was feeling very confused hersef when she explained it. ;-] Thanks you so much for the review! ~megan~
It's great ! I like your writing style. Did you say Caroline was one of her best friends? Please update soon!
Author's Response: Ack, yes, I did- lack of character planning. I'm going to fix that as soon as I finish typing this. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it! ~megan~
It's great ! I like your writing style. Did you say Caroline was one of her best friends? Please update soon!
Author's Response:
this story has real potential and is one of the best openeing chapters i have read in a while, well done!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's such an amazing compliment~ ~megan~
I hope you write more soon! I really like this story! cant wait for more! lol!!
:)
Author's Response: Lol. I hope i write more soon, too... =P ~megan~
I really like this story! I was laughing through most of it. Write more! Update soon! I'm so excited for future chapters.
Author's Response: *sighs* Unfortunately, the humor isn't mine... most of it comes from my friends at school. I'm so unoriginal that I have to steal it. ;-] But thanks! I'll try to update soon! ~megan~
I agree with KASK, also... you know, how you portray everyone and everything! I really, really, really hope you keep this story going! It's GREAT!
Author's Response: *grins hugely* Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! ~megan~
Ooh! I like! I really hope you update soon! this is such a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update soon, and I'm glad you liked it! ~megan~
wow this is really good keep wrighting
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~megan~
haha, i luv it one piece of advice though...
UPDATE IT!!!
Author's Response:
haha, i luv it one piece of advice though...
UPDATE IT!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to update soon! ~megan~
This is an interesting start. I like the relationship Lily and James have and I like the way you portray everyone. I'm curious to see where you take this.
One thing I was confused about was when Lily says her two best friends are Kat & Caroline. And then you say Lily doesn't mind Caroline, but she's shallow. And then you have Caroline best friends with Mary, who Lily can't stand. I just don't see how Caroline and Lily are best friends like she says.
I'll keep a look out for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Ack, that was a result of my refusal to character plan... I changed my mind mid-chapter about where Caroline was going to go- I'll have to fix that. Thanks for the review! ~megan~
I like this story--it's lighthearted and funny. I'm interested to see where you go with Lily's character.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! ~megan~
