ok........can you make a story out of it?
Author's Response: I'm not much of a story-writer, but I guess I could give it a shot. I was actually thinking about writing a story along the same lines, and it's nice to have some encouragment, but I can't promise that it'll get through! Thanks!
I think I read one of your poems before. Very nicely done. The ending was not at all sudden like in certain poems of this ship and thats what I liked about it.=Sammy
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wasn't very sure if it was as good as the others, even if it is my favorite.
its really good and better then other james/lily pre-love things. I like how its short and to the point.
Author's Response: I don't think it's better than some other stuff I've read, but I haven't seen anything in the j/l pre-love poetry section, so I guess it could inspire other people to try to! Thanks for the review!