Ooh, this is interesting. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Harry and Snape plays out. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. A large portion of this fic has been written already, it is just being polished and sent through the eys of my wonderful beta. I hope you keep reading =) Thanks!
Excellent! I love the way Snape's internal monologue reveals so much about his character, yet still does not reveal which side he is on. I also like Snape's musings on the sameness of all the houses on Privet Drive. I could never live somewhere like that, so I feel his displeasure at being there. I am especially curious how this story will play out.
Author's Response: Snape's side is one of the main themes running throughout the story, so I am thrilled you have commented on it already! I hope you continue to read and enjoy. Thank you for reviewing!
I'm sorry no one's reviewed yet, but also elated I get to be first!
Your writing skills are admirable and the story flows seamlessly. Your characterization is particularly enjoyable. The Dark Lord was perfectly dark and charismatic, and the internal monolouges interesting and colourful. What can I say? You got me hooked.
On my favourites!
Author's Response: I am thrilled to have you as my first reviewer also! Admittedly I don't know you very well, but your name is one of those I associate quite highly with the site, so I am very pleased to have a review =) Thank you so much for commenting on the flow of the story, as it is one of the things I work hardest on. It is wonderful to hear you like the characterisation too, as it is always nice to know you are getting your favourite characters right. Anyway, I hope you continue to enjoy in the future, and thank you for taking the time to review ^^
I'm sorry no one's reviewed yet, but also elated I get to be first!
Your writing skills are admirable and the story flows seamlessly. Your characterization is particularly enjoyable. The Dark Lord was perfectly dark and charismatic, and the internal monolouges interesting and colourful. What can I say? You got me hooked.
On my favourites!
Author's Response: I am thrilled to have you as my first reviewer also! Admittedly I don't know you very well, but your name is one of those I associate quite highly with the site, so I am very pleased to have a review =) Thank you so much for commenting on the flow of the story, as it is one of the things I work hardest on. It is wonderful to hear you like the characterisation too, as it is always nice to know you are getting your favourite characters right. Anyway, I hope you continue to enjoy in the future, and thank you for taking the time to review ^^
