This gave me the creeps but I loved it!
wonderfully creepy. I'll give you two thumbs up cuz reading this made me recall McBeth. Yeah, I'm weird that way.=Sammy
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm incredibly flattered by such a comparison.
I have told you many times, probably hundreds, that you are an amazing poet. This one only proves it further.
You've captured the feelings of a person after wearing the locket very well - the destruction it causes, the pain it spreads.
Wonderful, dear! *squishes*
Author's Response: Thank you, Manu! My only note is that it's the thoughts of the person who made the potion, not wore the locket it concealed.