Reviewer: Saif
Date: 12/30/07 16:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

This gave me the creeps but I loved it!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/23/07 23:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

wonderfully creepy. I'll give you two thumbs up cuz reading this made me recall McBeth. Yeah, I'm weird that way.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm incredibly flattered by such a comparison.

Reviewer: xombie
Date: 12/23/07 8:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have told you many times, probably hundreds, that you are an amazing poet. This one only proves it further.

You've captured the feelings of a person after wearing the locket very well - the destruction it causes, the pain it spreads.

Wonderful, dear! *squishes*

Author's Response: Thank you, Manu! My only note is that it's the thoughts of the person who made the potion, not wore the locket it concealed.

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