MuggleNet Fan Fiction
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Name: xombie (Signed) · Date: 12/23/07 7:57 · For: Chapter 1
Hey, nice! You've improved in your dialogues, though I was confused with the words in between. It all cleared up in the end, though. Are you planning to do a sequel to this? I'll be looking forward to it.

Author's Response: I am! As you know, I've already written a ton of stuff about this character and, though not morally appealing, the story and the character will both continue

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 12/16/07 18:23 · For: Chapter 1
interesting. I would be curious to know what happens later on, why this person would be telling their life story so much later.

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