Hey, nice! You've improved in your dialogues, though I was confused with the words in between. It all cleared up in the end, though. Are you planning to do a sequel to this? I'll be looking forward to it.
Author's Response: I am! As you know, I've already written a ton of stuff about this character and, though not morally appealing, the story and the character will both continue
interesting. I would be curious to know what happens later on, why this person would be telling their life story so much later.