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Reviews For Singing Our Song

Name: fawkeshermione221 (Signed) · Date: 12/29/07 10:04 · For: Singing Our Song
Wow...I never really liked Cho too much, but this really made me feel for her. This is a really beautiful poem, well done.

~fawkeshermione


Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 12/23/07 23:14 · For: Singing Our Song
Maybe it's just me but this line:

Him all damn night.

would sound better if written like this:

Him through the long night.

Other then that, well done. Nice insight on Cho.=Sammy


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