That was great. You should write more.
Congrats on your first fic!!!!!!!!!!!:)
I liked your story, the emotions were so intense!!! Great job!!
Wow... that is a really good piece of writing. I LOVE it!!
hmm.... wonder what happened to jason....
wow. that is a really good story.
Very nice story, well written, i enjoyed the way you looked back at what happened and the way you left me with this warm feeling that even after so many years everything is alright :) thank you
i cannot believe that this is your first story! this is like my 17th billionth time reading this story...its definetly one of my all-time faves! please let me know if you write any thing else! my e-mail is
all_canadian_blonde69@hotmail.com
cheers!
I liked it, but it was a bit out of character for both of them , maybe you should have put some warnings on the top, and I don't mean to sound prissy... cos otherwise I might not have read it. Anyway, it was good to see things from another characters point of view!
That was the most romantic thing I've ever read. Sure it was slightly out of character but who the heck cares?!That part about soulmates was perfect. Most of the R/Hr fics are a little wierd, but this one was perfect. Keep writing about those two.
That was the most romantic thing I've ever read. Sure it was slightly out of character but who the heck cares?!That part about soulmates was perfect. Most of the R/Hr fics are a little wierd, but this one was perfect. Keep writing about those two.
Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!! this story is a great start! I am in the process of typing my first story, and I can only hope that it's this good! 1000/10
hermione was out of character but i loved it-the part where she didnt believe in soulmates was a good touch if you ask me. maybe a chapter from rons POV? or more about the kids
very intriguing though quite a bit out of character.
AWESOME!!!....That ws a great story..I was just like Hermione with not believing in soulmates but I guess I should start believing in them now...<3
This isn't the first time I've read this fic and I can't imagine why I haven't reviewed before but I haven't. This is great and I don't think Hermione is OOC, everyone has things on the inside no one sees like the swearing and her insecurities that are evident in the real books and in your fic. It's an excellent fic! *10*
LUVED IT , so good, hermione was a little OoC, only cuz of the words she used, cuz in the books she always yells at ron 4 swearing, otherwise very very good!
