Reviewer: Lone Wolf
Date: 08/09/05 17:21
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

You are right...anyone can be a father but not everyone can be a dad. My wife and I have always thought that as well. Thanks for the great story. That was a nice one shot. As to the reviewer who didn't think Hermione wouldn't make that kind of mistake. It can happen to anyone...I do mean anyone if you have 'relations' outside of marriage. However, it isn't always a bad ending...as this story illustrates sometimes it is the beginning of something great. The world works in unexpected ways. From a Dad but not a father. Take care, Cory

Reviewer: lovestruck90
Date: 03/13/05 12:38
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

That was incrediblehow Harry like automatically stepped up when he was needed its just so... him. nehoos i loved the story!! great work!!

Reviewer: HPLiNKN92
Date: 02/13/05 18:30
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

*wipes tear from eye* that was so..so.......WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh*takes out 15 pakcs of tissues..* thats better.anyway, nice story.......i never knew hermione was the kind to go to a pub

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/06/05 9:44
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

Awww! That was a really cute story!! It's so sweet to see Harry+Hermione together! Their reactions to each-other are also so damn cute! I really like this story! ;)

Reviewer: smartashermioneiluvher
Date: 01/21/05 3:56
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

RON AND HERMIONE ARRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU FUCKING IDIOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S.DO YOU KNOW THE FUCKING PURPOSE OF THIS STORY IT HAS TO BE H/HR NOT R/HR I FEEL LIKE SLAYING THAT LITTLE BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Appearently you didn't read it...

Reviewer: Aidayla
Date: 12/29/04 18:33
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

That was wonderful! though, I'll admit I'm having a hard time believing that Hermione would get pregnant out of wedlock...she's never been rash or a "live for the moment" sort of person..yet she is human so ppl do make mistakes...Anyway...that was brilliant!!!

Author's Response: Being Human in combination with alcohol, stress and angry makes any one unrash. Thanks for reveiwing!

Reviewer: spellbound
Date: 12/29/04 14:04
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

Fantastic story. I was so surprised when you named Harry's daughter Lily, i was thinking of doing the same for my fanfic, honestly its like one mind! I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: slimdas4
Date: 12/27/04 22:46
Chapter: Faults and Virtues: Love Unconditional

I have to admit that I didn't read the entire story because of a lack of time, but the first six chapters were very good. Keep writing.

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