Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/24/12 23:09
Chapter: Part 1

Hi again! I just realized that this was the last story in your list of the Master of Enchantment Series! :( and since I can see that you are still writing, I beg of you to keep this going!!!!!!!!!! I want to see Snape as a father!!!!!!! I hope you get this review, and please consider keeping this story going!!!!!

Author's Response: SubHub and I have always meant to write the story of Severus and Hermione's baby. I may yet do so, one day. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/24/12 23:01
Chapter: Part 2

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will gladly accept that dedication! And I'm so happy for Hermione and Severus!!!!! Great job, once more!

Reviewer: JoieFouquet22
Date: 03/31/12 1:53
Chapter: Part 2

I stand corrected. I should have read this chapter before jumping to conclusions in my Hermione way. Beautifully written, ma'am! Such spirit and love between the two perfectly matched, well known characers. You truly have a gift.

Reviewer: JoieFouquet22
Date: 03/31/12 1:09
Chapter: Part 1

Question... In the first of this incredible series, when Severus showed Hermione into his mind, I distinctly remember the Mirror of Erised being mentioned. In the mirror, Severus showed his rememberance of desiring a "faceless" women who transformed into Hemione, and a black haired child with her eyes. Didn't that mean he WANTED a child?

Reviewer: roni2012
Date: 02/08/12 23:40
Chapter: Part 2

never read a plot, like it! fallen in love with severus's snarkness! love learning about mr. alister. happy to hear a baby snape will be born!!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/08/11 21:06
Chapter: Part 2

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I was happy to have discovered that I hadn't read this story before. I love Severus and Hermione as a couple. My favorite part was when Severus was 'babysitting' for Diana. I can see the baby going for his nose as if it were a toy. You described the baby's behavior so perfectly. I can understand Severus not being entrtanced with other people's babies but being sure that he would love his own. My only regret is that this story is only 2 chapters long. Excellent job.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/07/11 1:27
Chapter: Part 1

As I was looking over your writing, I realized I had never read this story. I must have been saving it and then didn't get around to reading it. The descriptions of the babies were great. I'll bet that Severus thinks Hermione is too busy with her career to think about having babies at this time in their lives. Or, maybe the strength of the Enchantment is too strong and he doesn't see the place for another person in their relationship. I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm so excited that I found another piece of your writing that I hadn't read yet. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Angelix19
Date: 02/25/11 8:08
Chapter: Part 2

I loved the whole master of enchantment series. I hope you will continue with writing it. I would love to see the baby grow up.

Greetings from Belgium!

Reviewer: avdreader
Date: 10/27/09 21:56
Chapter: Part 2

I loved Severus' conversation with Little

Reviewer: severus_sirius_draco_hermione
Date: 08/23/09 21:11
Chapter: Part 2

Wonderful. I definitely am one of those girls who someday dreams of being a mom. This was a lovely little fic!

Reviewer: snapeluvr13
Date: 08/12/09 22:16
Chapter: Part 2

Aw that was an amazing chapter! I hope you will keep writing the snape's story I would love to hear more!!! Keep up the amazing work!!! :D

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 02/25/09 20:55
Chapter: Part 2

this story always makes me sad. it's really good and i love to read it but whenever I do it reminds me of how much i do want to be a mom but then i remember that im sixteen and ill equipped.

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 04/28/08 18:56
Chapter: Part 1

the bear is so cute

Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 03/13/08 16:21
Chapter: Part 2

Wonderful, especially the scene of Severus and the babies and later the babysitting scenes :)



Reviewer: Laleigh Rocco
Date: 02/24/08 10:57
Chapter: Part 1

that's cute!!!
Great job!!!

Reviewer: sandyh
Date: 02/14/08 21:14
Chapter: Part 2

This whole line of stories has been very delicious. I do hope that you continue with it. I would love to know if they have a boy or girl and what changes the baby has on the relationship.

Reviewer: NorthernPhoenix
Date: 02/13/08 3:44
Chapter: Part 2

That was a great story.

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 02/08/08 13:48
Chapter: Part 2

If only all stories had such a perfect and happy ending. I have two sweet beautiful little boys I wouldn't trade for the world. Thank you for sharing, for making it so....I don't know just so.

Reviewer: MissMolliewobbles
Date: 01/24/08 17:23
Chapter: Part 2

I know I'm going to get hate mail for this, but its a pity that you don't write Ron/Hermione fanfictions...You could make a really great story...

Reviewer: MissMolliewobbles
Date: 01/24/08 17:19
Chapter: Part 1

I know I'm going to get super hate mail for this, but it's a pity you don't like Ron/Hermione. You could really make a great story... But other than the ship it was great!

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