Nice Job! I liked how you used Petunia's POV for this. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks =)
Very good but i dont get the poem or title..you shoulld have saved it for a later fic....anyways i loved how you prtrayed sirius and you did petunia really well too.....keep up the good work bc your writting style id good as well
Author's Response: The title came about from a line in the fic that says: 'appraising the chances that she could ever outshine her sister. No, she had far to go before that could even form a laughable threat.' Petunia doesn't think she can compete with her sister, and as the poem also says, Thursdays Child has far too go. Not very well explained, but I hope that makes a bit more sense to you now. I am very glad you liked the portrayal of Sirius, since he comes off as something of a jerk in this, which people don't always like. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Great Job! Exactly how i see Petunia at this time- she has convinced herself that magic is worthless, but she is still jealous.
I don't think the poem is right, though. I am Thursday's child and i am not full of grace.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I am very glad you liked Petunia, as this was my first real time writing her. Oh, Thursday's child had far to go...you are thinking of Tuesday =P
I LOVED IT! Your writing was brilliant and I loved your characterisation of everyone! Twas perfect!
Author's Response: Aw, this is such a wondeful review. Thank you very much! I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
I love this. I love the idea and it's written very well.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your lovely comments =)