Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 12/29/07 10:44
Chapter: Christmas With The Order

Here I was expecting a nice little Christmas story, and you give us a missing moment of DH, complete with Christmas Spirit, angst, and action.
Wow! It was great! From the first word, I was sucked right in to your story. I loved that the passwords and security questions were so much in character for each person.
Having Bill want to growl over his steak was a perfect addition, and something I actually have been expecting from a lot more authors.
The shared cup and toast was nice. With Bill talking about Harry, Ron and Hermione being out there, knowing Ron was upstairs was a little funny in the midst of the poignant moment. Good job!
The memories of the three lost was excellently written. As you probably already know, I love Sirius, and your comments about him were wonderful.
Kingsley’s appearance was a good explanation of his almost snatching, and Remus taking charge was so like him. The descriptions Kingsley gave were great. But to think he was that close to Harry and Hermione and couldn’t help them was a great addition.
Excellent job, and good luck on the Challenge! I look forward to putting it in the winners category in the Library.
I enjoyed this immensely and will be back to read your other soon. Until then though, keep up the great work!


Author's Response: Thank you * ∞!!! I love Remus and Sirius too! That's why they both had the spotlight on them. And I couldn't live with myself without doing paying that mangy dog his due and proper. And the way I saw it, when Kingsley burst in, Ron was peeking down the stairway, and after everyone left, he was fretting in his room when he heard the Deluminator. Hee hee, it's so fun to work into the story rather than around it. I'm so glad you liked it! Again, thanks.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/20/07 16:28
Chapter: Christmas With The Order

good story! it's so depresing that they were trying to have a nice christmas, but then of course voldy had to spoil it. as usual. *sigh*

Author's Response: But how do they say it? Love conquers all! =]

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Chocolate Frog by L A Moody 3rd-5th Years
Amid the desolation of Diagon Alley, a tiny ray of hope lay buried. Nothing...
I Suspect Nargles by foolondahill17 3rd-5th Years
“No one’s ever kissed me before…. What is one to do now?” An extensive...
The Life and Times of Linnea Potter by Cantatrix 1st-2nd Years
Linnea Potter has lived under the tyranny of her relatives for the better part...
FEATURED
Glass over the Flame by the opaleye 3rd-5th Years
Harry, Hermione, and the moments in between. He doesn’t say that this...
Tom Riddle and the Chamber of Secrets by CanisMajor 3rd-5th Years
What really happened the last time someone let the Basilisk out? Harry Potter...
Red Squirrel/Sun Rises by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
+ He wouldn't celebrate his birthday, but his son had other ideas. + This was...
Sybill Trelawney and the Unexpected Gift by Squibstress 3rd-5th Years
Sybill Trelawney learns to live with her Inner Eye, cooking sherry, and Minerva...
Pat-a-Cake by foolondahill17 1st-2nd Years
Molly Weasley II, called Pat, and twenty-one lot and little-known facts. Or...
Wood by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
Marcus Flint, the infamous Super Seventh Captain of the Slytherin Quidditch...
CATEGORIES