Reviews For Ambivalence
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/15/08 19:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great poem, Katie! I really liked it, and my favourite line was:

Will they open a door, or slam it in your face?
^^It was really... i dont know. I'm speechless. Wow. That's new... Cool. 100000000000/10 {Becca}

Author's Response: Thank you for the amazing review, Becca! rnI'm glad my poem was so striking it rendered you speechless. . . *is awed by her own abilities* rnrnI really liked that line, too! I have to say that my favorite part is the 'will you say it in the open, or will you whisper it behind closed doors, afraid to be heard?' line. (Paraphrase; I didn't actually quote it. But hey, it's my writing, after all. *wink*) rnrnThank you again for the wonderful review!rnOkay, a little shameless self-promotion coming up:rnIf you want to read more by me, check out my new story: 'Same Auld Lang Syne.' It's based on the song of the same name by Dan Fogelberg.rnShameless self-promoting over!rn~Katie

Reviewer: randompersonlaughing
Date: 12/25/07 19:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh and i forgot to sign my name u might not know this was me so here i am
-Amy
P.S. great job

Author's Response: I could tell it was you because you're always 'randompersonlaughing' and because you have a definitive style. Katie

Reviewer: randompersonlaughing
Date: 12/25/07 19:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Grrr. i wrote an o-mazing review and then it didn't work.grrrr. o well. great job i like the questions and i agree the ending note was very strong. I was expecting. "I Do" for like a marriage but this is better. again great job and MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YR. YAY!!!

Author's Response: Yay Amy! Thanks for the great review! It was nice to log on and see encouragement. :-) I hope I read some of your stories sometime soon. . . -hint hint- ~Katie

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/23/07 23:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Your poem was good but the note on which you ended was brilliant.=Sammy

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 12/23/07 9:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Katie! That was such a nice poem! Very true, too... I like all the "will"s. It was a very nice poem ^_^

Oh, and Merry Christmas!
~Padfoot >.<


Author's Response: Thank you so much, Padfoot! I liked the 'will''s myself, not to boast or anything. And a belated Happy Christmas and Merry New Years, too! ~Katie

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