Reviews For Beyond
Reviewer: Nova
Date: 08/05/09 3:03
Chapter: Beyond

That was really nice. ;)
It made me feel kind of melancholy.
You've got really great poetry skills!

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 07/22/08 12:21
Chapter: Beyond

I really liked this poem.

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 05/31/08 22:38
Chapter: Beyond

Remora, this is wonderful! I love the flow of it, how at times it didn't match perfectly, but still fit perfectly in the poem. The imagrey and rhyming are really good as well. Great job, Haylee

Author's Response: Thanks, Haylee!

Reviewer: BertieBottsBeans
Date: 04/25/08 22:19
Chapter: Beyond

Oh, how sweet! *wipes eyes* Remus and Tonks's deaths hit me hardest in DH (I luuuurve Remus especially!), and it's so nice to read a good poem about them. This is an interesting take on their relationship, one I haven't seen before, and you balanced the conflict of Remus's wanting to be with Tonks and yet also wanting her to be safe perfectly. Great characterization. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm sort of surprised that I managed to keep the characterization in my pre-test jitters, actually. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lyra Lestrange
Date: 02/26/08 16:43
Chapter: Beyond

This is so sweet! RL/NT is the best ship ever and I was so sad because they had to die so soon! I like how this is from Remus's perspective, and I can imagine him saying this easily. Great job!

PS: It is perfectly acceptable to write fanfiction during a math class!

Author's Response: Thanks! Remus/Tonks is my OTP, so I always write stuff about them, whether it's math, science, English or Painfully-Gruelling-Tortorous-Chamber-of-Death-Also-Known-as-Gym-Class. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cheerio015
Date: 01/01/08 20:08
Chapter: Beyond

haha well, he didn't have to wait TOO long!!!
I LOVE poems!!! Especially writing helps me vent my feelings in a NION-violent way...a way that doesnt hurt other peole! So therefore, I also love READING poems!!! :D :D :D
Keep writing, you're great!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing poems too. Especially depressing ones!

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 12/30/07 20:31
Chapter: Beyond

Ok, this is me, clumsywerewolf2438, I'm just saying that if (I don't know if it works for anyone but the author) you report voldiegirl for flaming I will be very upset because she was joking, I know her personally and I deserved that.

Reviewer: voldiegirl
Date: 12/24/07 10:19
Chapter: Beyond

You. Are. So. Dead!!!

Author's Response: Oh, crap, and you know where I sleep, too. I'm sorry! But no one know who you are! Except for, ahem, some people. But don't worry, no one else will get it. That's just the image I get whenever I hear (or read, in this case) the words "Tiki Punch." By the way, I miss you! Vactation's boring so far. Did you know you can delete reviews? Just click delete, you can get rid of it.

Author's Response: PS: Merry Chistmas! And don't kill me.

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 12/19/07 21:26
Chapter: Beyond

this is beautiful. It seems like Remus is welcoming her back, calling Tonks home. Anyway, great story.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's kind of what I meant it to be! Thanks again!

Reviewer: voldiegirl
Date: 12/19/07 17:19
Chapter: Beyond

*sniff* that was so emotional! And it's Tiki Punch!
Lol, had to add that. The poem pwns tonks!

Author's Response: Thanks, Luna! Speaking of Tiki Punch, remember that one time when Draco dared me to chug a glass of it, but you missed the pained look on my face as it went up my nose cuz you were dancing around with a bra on the outside of your shirt singing "I'm so pretty?" Good times, good times...sigh

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/17/07 23:49
Chapter: Beyond

Sooner then you'de think Remus.

I guess Tonks felt somewhat the same so she died too. Good jiob.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 12/17/07 11:26
Chapter: Beyond

Hey, there's nothing wrong with doing something more interesting in boring lessons. At least the something that you were doing was interlectual. That's really sweet! I like the last verse-y bit, it was very sad. He doesn't realise how soon he'll be reunited with her... sniff.

Author's Response: Thanks. The saddest part for me was getting into character. Especially since I had to act like I didn't know she only had a couple minutes to live...

Reviewer: Blonde_Lily
Date: 12/16/07 21:10
Chapter: Beyond

Beautiful! Pretty good for having done it in Geometry. Very well thought of.

Author's Response: Thanks. Plus, I aced the test: 104. Maybe we should all write poems in math...

Reviewer: tokiolover123
Date: 12/16/07 16:04
Chapter: Beyond

i like your poen its sweet and sad this character made me cry when i found out they both die even though thier fictional it make me very sad

Author's Response: Thanks! It made me sad when they died too. When they came into the story, it was a time in my life when most of my friends were fictional, so it was like losing an old friend that I'd known forever when they died.

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 12/16/07 12:29
Chapter: Beyond

Hey!!! Nice one, but don't cha think that its too sentimental for Tonks??? But still, its beautiful!

Author's Response: Remus always struck me as the sentimental type...but I do imagine Tonks rolling her eyes at him. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 12/16/07 11:58
Chapter: Beyond

This is so good, and it is sad. Remus and Tonks were my favorite characters, and this displays how he would have felt from above. :(

Author's Response: They were my favorites too. I'm glad you thought it was good.

Author's Response: Oh, I forgot to add this, but I really like your username. It makes me think of the good old days before one of my friends moved and I said that almost every day.

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