I've never read a story from a Muggle's point of view before, and I'm really enjoying it! The two plots really keep the story moving, and I'm wondering how the two will come together. I'm looking forward to the next update - you left us with a bit of a cliffhanger!

Very good, Tash. The way you've described every-day events so well is fabulous. The sort of thing that's so trivial it stands out when written in a story.

I like how you've woven in interesting bits in the boring stuff.

Wish I could write like that. You know, I am very tempted to never again read a single one of your stories, because they always depress me so much. Perhaps one day I'll just... learn to write as well as you do.

Love Phia

Author's Response: Hi Phia! xD No, don't stop reading my stories. *squishes* Thanks for the review. :)