I've never read a story from a Muggle's point of view before, and I'm really enjoying it! The two plots really keep the story moving, and I'm wondering how the two will come together. I'm looking forward to the next update - you left us with a bit of a cliffhanger!
Wow! I like your OC. Let me guess, her brother is a Death Eater. I can see some drama coming. Keep this up. Good idea to focus on the sibling of a Muggleborn wizard.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you're liking Vicky so far. Her brother makes an appearance in the next chapter when things become more interesting...
Very good, Tash. The way you've described every-day events so well is fabulous. The sort of thing that's so trivial it stands out when written in a story.
I like how you've woven in interesting bits in the boring stuff.
Wish I could write like that. You know, I am very tempted to never again read a single one of your stories, because they always depress me so much. Perhaps one day I'll just... learn to write as well as you do.
Author's Response: Hi Phia! xD No, don't stop reading my stories. *squishes* Thanks for the review. :)
oh! c'est tres bon aussi! Je ne peux pas attendre le chapitre suivant! Vicky a un vie beacoup de excitement!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the review in French, although it took me a while to figure out what it meant. Glad you're enjoying it so far.