Reviews For It's Dark
Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/09/08 0:16
Chapter: It's Dark

Haha, I just read the stuff on your profile and laughed my head off. I did fall for that quiz where it was like, "You didn't even notice number 5 was gone." *wry smile*

Anyways, this was another good poem! I really like your style. Good job! :D

Reviewer: RavenclawDiamond
Date: 01/22/08 13:27
Chapter: It's Dark

A giid idea, very affective, I liked it!

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 12/24/07 13:14
Chapter: It's Dark

Have I reviewed this before? Well, in any case, that was an interesting poem. It was a little repetitive and dry-cut, but compelling and creepy.

Author's Response: Thanks! i hope it was. I don't like the idea of Voldermort meeting his mother and walking off into the sunset; i think someting worse would happen. Definetly something creepy.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/17/07 23:59
Chapter: It's Dark


I'm Sammy and I am the world's most annoying nitpick, specially when it comes to poetry.

But as far as I can see, you have done no wrong with this. Infact I very much like your style and sense in this poem. The uncertainty, the untangible, it all adds to a really good bit of work.


Author's Response: Thanks! I have a lot of very confusing arguments in my head, and i put a lot of it into very confusing poems. Poeams are great. They don't even need to rhyme. I seem to have gone a bit off topic so, once again, thanks! I think i might write some more poems... much easier to write then fics..... (mumbles and drifts away)

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 12/16/07 12:06
Chapter: It's Dark

This was very good. It is about Voldemort, right? It display's his sense of death very well if it is. Great job!

Author's Response: Yay! My first review! Thank you- i was a bit nervous about this one, but i think it went fine. Yeah- it's about Voldermort, but his memory is mostly gone. He can still feel that something is different (all his horcruxes have come back to him) but he dosn't know why. Thanks!

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