Haha, I just read the stuff on your profile and laughed my head off. I did fall for that quiz where it was like, "You didn't even notice number 5 was gone." *wry smile*
Anyways, this was another good poem! I really like your style. Good job! :D
A giid idea, very affective, I liked it!
Author's Response: Thankyou!
Have I reviewed this before? Well, in any case, that was an interesting poem. It was a little repetitive and dry-cut, but compelling and creepy.
Author's Response: Thanks! i hope it was. I don't like the idea of Voldermort meeting his mother and walking off into the sunset; i think someting worse would happen. Definetly something creepy.
I'm Sammy and I am the world's most annoying nitpick, specially when it comes to poetry.
But as far as I can see, you have done no wrong with this. Infact I very much like your style and sense in this poem. The uncertainty, the untangible, it all adds to a really good bit of work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a lot of very confusing arguments in my head, and i put a lot of it into very confusing poems. Poeams are great. They don't even need to rhyme. I seem to have gone a bit off topic so, once again, thanks! I think i might write some more poems... much easier to write then fics..... (mumbles and drifts away)
This was very good. It is about Voldemort, right? It display's his sense of death very well if it is. Great job!
Author's Response: Yay! My first review! Thank you- i was a bit nervous about this one, but i think it went fine. Yeah- it's about Voldermort, but his memory is mostly gone. He can still feel that something is different (all his horcruxes have come back to him) but he dosn't know why. Thanks!