Reviewer: Pretty_Fangirl
Date: 09/12/08 17:54
Chapter: Simmer Until He Boils

This is such a great story! The relationships between the characters are perfect, Teddy really probably went through at least half of this stuff, and Harry was such a great godfather!!!

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/26/08 17:23
Chapter: What Dreams May Come


Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 02/04/08 19:06
Chapter: What Dreams May Come

I loved reading this story! I really like how Teddy has his own trademark hair color just like Tonks did. That's cool!
Happy Writing!
~~Bella Black~~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :] It was lovely.

Reviewer: Guhlinda
Date: 01/26/08 13:37
Chapter: The Cost Of Glory

Kat, this was so good! I love how you portrayed Teddy! He was so much like his parents to me. *tear* you did a wonderful job of creating a plot and weaving in the pieces of his relationship with Harry, Victoire, and his parents so well! I love how he wrote them letters. That was so clever...


Author's Response: Thanks, Em! Haha, it's so weird seeing you on the site... Oh well!

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 01/16/08 7:09
Chapter: What Dreams May Come

Edit: never mind - I just saw it's a completed story. Oh well, it was very good. And now I think on it, this was a good place to end it. Anyway, great story!

Author's Response: Lol, thank you!

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 01/16/08 7:05
Chapter: What Dreams May Come

Great story! Update soon!

Author's Response: >.>

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 01/13/08 10:17
Chapter: What Dreams May Come

You've done it again, Kat! I'm smiling and I'm crying. Oh Godric, it was spectacular!

I loved the following description very much:
Staring down at his hands as if they were not his own, Teddy stopped in the middle of the room; the world began to spin around him. The sound of the book falling against the stiff mattress echoed in his ears causing him to shift his eyes up to it. He steadied himself from the vertigo that had suddenly overtaken him and moved to the bed, leaning against it. The journal was a mere foot away from him and yet he could not pick it up. It was as if his arm had temporarily lost functionality as it hung limply by his side. The shine of the sun caught the gold trimmings of the pages and at dauntingly glared into his eyes, enticing him to pick it back up.

It was so real and I felt I was there standing beside Teddy watching the journal fall.

The best quote:
He did love her; just not with the type of love he had for his parentsí memory.

Thats it. Love exists in form and you've explored the whole philosophy of it in one beautiful sentence. A very appropriate retrospection to Teddy's cauldron of jumbled emotions.

Two words, Mistletoe: Loved It.

~ Akay

Author's Response: Akay, you have been the best reviewer... EVER! I loved this review :] I'm glad you liked my description--I strive to be there with the character, as you've said above. Heh. Thanks, dear! Now I'm off to read your lovely entry :]

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 01/12/08 20:44
Chapter: What Dreams May Come

*sniff* good story! i got tears in my eyes! *sniff*

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/05/08 22:07
Chapter: Simmer Until He Boils

ok that last part made me cry it's a beautiful story i want to keep reading it asap. man it's sad but very very good.

Author's Response: Thanks again. I don't know what's up with these double reviews... >.<

Author's Response: Thanks again. I don't know what's up with these double reviews... >.<

Author's Response: Thanks again. I don't know what's up with these double reviews... >.<

Author's Response: Thanks again. I don't know what's up with these double reviews... >.<

Author's Response: Bahaha, that's kind of ironic! ^^^

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/05/08 22:06
Chapter: Simmer Until He Boils

ok that last part made me cry it's a beautiful story i want to keep reading it asap. man it's sad but very very good.

Author's Response: Thank you, the third chapter is in the queue, so get ready guys! :D

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 12/22/07 11:45
Chapter: The Cost Of Glory

you know what... in my opinion your story is the best one combined all the categories of the Winter Tales...

*thumbs up*

its like reading OotP! it feels as if i'm watching Teddy or Harry... Teddy, Harry, Teddy...

ugh... it should be like:

Mistletoe, Rowling, Mistletoe, Rowling...


mind blowing portryal of Teddy's current position... its so realistic and love the way how he isnt even thinking abt how would Vic think, cuz his prob with his parents is too much more than a relationship with a girlfriend..
it was so nice to read something so real and well expressed...

good job!


Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm really glad you are so fond of this! :]] This review made me feel all arm and fuzzy on the inside. *grins* --Kat

Author's Response: warm and fuzzy... not arm... >.> <.<

Reviewer: damabeth
Date: 12/19/07 19:42
Chapter: Simmer Until He Boils

Wonderful! Grandma Beth

Author's Response: Thank you :]

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/19/07 16:21
Chapter: Simmer Until He Boils

*sniff* good chapter! but one thing: you said in the beginning that ginny had blonde hair, but it's red. update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, darling! And that was Victoire sitting at the table with Teddy looking upon her, if that's the bit you're referring to.... :/

Reviewer: star_sailor
Date: 12/13/07 0:08
Chapter: The Cost Of Glory

This was a very good read! Remus comes out in Teddy with the way he talks. They both seem really thought out whenever they're speaking. The flashback worked perfectly too. And the composition and description is amazing; very eloquent.

This goes without mentioning the fact that Teddy and Victoire are totally cute together (if you abbreviate both of their names, you can call them TV! How cool!) You also get several cool points for squeezing "lackadaisical" in there.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was also worried that Teddy would be a bit too angsty and not enough like Remus, but I'm really glad that you think otherwise! -Kat

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 12/10/07 23:11
Chapter: The Cost Of Glory

you're good!

love teddy's emotions. also how he and vic are. its a sweet tale and i love it!

the best part was teddy brushing his against the 'moony was here' carving... *smiles dreamily*

the title caught me, actually. i expected teddy to be like a first year or second year on most. but then as the story developes, its different i see. i'm not sure if u intended to do it or not, but during the first half of the fic, the thoughts running in teddy's head actually tell us that he was brought up without parents. they were childish in a way, as if there was actually something lacking in his life. :). ...

brillaint! excellent expression.

update soon. you did a very well job here...

- Akay

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I owe the title to wewillmissyou at the forums. :D I'm glad that you like his emotions. I was a bit nervous about if they were portray well enough or not :/. Thanks again! -Kat

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/09/07 20:03
Chapter: The Cost Of Glory

*sniff* good story!! its so mean how that one guy played that prank on teddy! i really liked the harry/teddy flashback though..

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! :]

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