Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/19/09 12:45
Chapter: Part I: Chapter 3: It's Beginning to Look A Lot Like ?

I think it would've been cool if Snape had gone shopping muggle style with Hermione in the car. Hermione is certainly growing on Snape. This story just shows how nice Hermione is. She even bought a present for Ron, though in this case he didn't deserve it. I wish they had bought a tree. I'm sure Hermione will figure out a way to get one. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/19/09 8:56
Chapter: Part I: Chapter 2: Home for the Holidays

That was sweet. I've read enough Snape fiction so that his compassion wasn't surprising. His taking care of Hermione was wonderful, not to mention effective. I've admitted before that I'm impressed by shows of power--so Snape's blasting in the door--having gotten past Hermione's wards--impressed me to no end. I was also impressed by Hermione's grace in being embarrassed when Snape offered her money for his time spent in her home. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/18/09 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is interesting--Snape "babysitting" Hermione. I think it will be fun to see where this goes. It will be a good Christmas story. Great chapter.

Reviewer: alex_mashville
Date: 10/01/09 15:22
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

Beautiful! Heart warming! I couldn't bare that it had to end. Excellent work. Thank you very much. ^^

Reviewer: Secret shadows
Date: 09/24/09 22:03
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

Amazing finish! Bravo, bravo! (:
I adored it, simply adored it!
Well done!
Congratulations!
I'm sad to see it's done.
Hehe Fox and Rose. I found it ironic the book was called the Little Prince when that was Snape's mum's maiden name. ;)

Reviewer: rakkanights
Date: 07/23/09 23:08
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

bloody amazing!

Reviewer: rakkanights
Date: 07/23/09 22:05
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

woohoo chess! I bet I could beat snape xD

Reviewer: PuellaSola
Date: 06/29/09 3:38
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

*Sighs in utter content* That was adorable! I'm completely happy that it turned out like that, even though Harry and Ron seem to have the worst timing... *grins* I'm sure they hate it as much as H&S do, as well.
Thanks so much for writing this! It totally brightened up my day!

Reviewer: Sparrow Rae
Date: 03/31/09 2:37
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

I absolutely love it!

Reviewer: sapphireduck
Date: 12/19/08 21:29
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

I love this story! Wonderful job! :D

Reviewer: SmartAsianBelle
Date: 10/23/08 2:36
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

Oooh...great storytelling. I'm not afraid to admit that I cried like a baby!

Reviewer: not a writer
Date: 10/21/08 16:09
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

absolutely wonderfull! Thank you!!

Reviewer: Baela
Date: 09/21/08 14:52
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

That was great! I think that Harry and Ronn were a bit OOC, but the plot came togerther quite nicely! Well done!

Reviewer: Rickmans girl
Date: 08/20/08 11:17
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

i am in love with this story

Reviewer: Rickmans girl
Date: 08/19/08 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

good but i fell that the more you dont get right down to snape the more the girls want him

Reviewer: Rickmans girl
Date: 08/19/08 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

good but i fell that the more you dont get right down to snape the more the girls want him

Reviewer: quirksnquills
Date: 07/30/08 1:57
Chapter: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

That. Kicked. Ass.

Reviewer: rjlcool
Date: 07/29/08 8:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

HAHAHA:)) oh my God... i couldnt stop laughing!!! good work, Albus!!:D

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 06/21/08 9:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

ˇTú estas muy bien!
You are very good!

Reviewer: white_egret
Date: 06/11/08 8:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really, really enjoyed this story. After such a wonderful beginning, I was really worried when I came to the three-year interval--I thought you were going to skip the climax of the story like some authors do. But you more than followed through! All your portrayals of the characters were wonderful (won't lie, I've always hated Ron, and I loved the way you put him in his place). :) I couldn't help but go back and re-read the last few chapters, I enjoyed them so much. I did think that the references to "For Whom the Bell Tolls" were slightly over the top, especially for a story that ends so happily. You're a strong writer--you don't need to rely on Hemingway to insert extra meaning to your story! Overall, though, a resounding "well done!" I loved the bits about the licorice tea, Snapes partially-buttoned trousers, Hermione being compared to Snape when she's in management, etc., etc., etc. One of the best SS/HG stories I've read--and believe me, I've read quite a few.

Thank you!

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