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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/19/09 12:45 · For: Part I: Chapter 3: It's Beginning to Look A Lot Like ?
I think it would've been cool if Snape had gone shopping muggle style with Hermione in the car. Hermione is certainly growing on Snape. This story just shows how nice Hermione is. She even bought a present for Ron, though in this case he didn't deserve it. I wish they had bought a tree. I'm sure Hermione will figure out a way to get one. Great chapter.


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/19/09 8:56 · For: Part I: Chapter 2: Home for the Holidays
That was sweet. I've read enough Snape fiction so that his compassion wasn't surprising. His taking care of Hermione was wonderful, not to mention effective. I've admitted before that I'm impressed by shows of power--so Snape's blasting in the door--having gotten past Hermione's wards--impressed me to no end. I was also impressed by Hermione's grace in being embarrassed when Snape offered her money for his time spent in her home. Great chapter.


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/18/09 20:02 · For: Chapter 1
This is interesting--Snape "babysitting" Hermione. I think it will be fun to see where this goes. It will be a good Christmas story. Great chapter.


Name: alex_mashville (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 15:22 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
Beautiful! Heart warming! I couldn't bare that it had to end. Excellent work. Thank you very much. ^^


Name: Secret shadows (Signed) · Date: 09/24/09 22:03 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
Amazing finish! Bravo, bravo! (:
I adored it, simply adored it!
Well done!
Congratulations!
I'm sad to see it's done.
Hehe Fox and Rose. I found it ironic the book was called the Little Prince when that was Snape's mum's maiden name. ;)


Name: rakkanights (Signed) · Date: 07/23/09 23:08 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
bloody amazing!


Name: rakkanights (Signed) · Date: 07/23/09 22:05 · For: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift
woohoo chess! I bet I could beat snape xD


Name: PuellaSola (Signed) · Date: 06/29/09 3:38 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
*Sighs in utter content* That was adorable! I'm completely happy that it turned out like that, even though Harry and Ron seem to have the worst timing... *grins* I'm sure they hate it as much as H&S do, as well.
Thanks so much for writing this! It totally brightened up my day!


Name: Sparrow Rae (Signed) · Date: 03/31/09 2:37 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
I absolutely love it!


Name: sapphireduck (Signed) · Date: 12/19/08 21:29 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
I love this story! Wonderful job! :D


Name: SmartAsianBelle (Signed) · Date: 10/23/08 2:36 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
Oooh...great storytelling. I'm not afraid to admit that I cried like a baby!


Name: not a writer (Signed) · Date: 10/21/08 16:09 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
absolutely wonderfull! Thank you!!


Name: Baela (Signed) · Date: 09/21/08 14:52 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
That was great! I think that Harry and Ronn were a bit OOC, but the plot came togerther quite nicely! Well done!


Name: Rickmans girl (Signed) · Date: 08/20/08 11:17 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
i am in love with this story


Name: Rickmans girl (Signed) · Date: 08/19/08 11:01 · For: Chapter 1
good but i fell that the more you dont get right down to snape the more the girls want him


Name: Rickmans girl (Signed) · Date: 08/19/08 11:01 · For: Chapter 1
good but i fell that the more you dont get right down to snape the more the girls want him


Name: quirksnquills (Signed) · Date: 07/30/08 1:57 · For: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling
That. Kicked. Ass.


Name: rjlcool (Signed) · Date: 07/29/08 8:09 · For: Chapter 1
HAHAHA:)) oh my God... i couldnt stop laughing!!! good work, Albus!!:D


Name: Love_Snape (Signed) · Date: 06/21/08 9:50 · For: Chapter 1
ˇTú estas muy bien!
You are very good!


Name: white_egret (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 8:52 · For: Chapter 1
I really, really enjoyed this story. After such a wonderful beginning, I was really worried when I came to the three-year interval--I thought you were going to skip the climax of the story like some authors do. But you more than followed through! All your portrayals of the characters were wonderful (won't lie, I've always hated Ron, and I loved the way you put him in his place). :) I couldn't help but go back and re-read the last few chapters, I enjoyed them so much. I did think that the references to "For Whom the Bell Tolls" were slightly over the top, especially for a story that ends so happily. You're a strong writer--you don't need to rely on Hemingway to insert extra meaning to your story! Overall, though, a resounding "well done!" I loved the bits about the licorice tea, Snapes partially-buttoned trousers, Hermione being compared to Snape when she's in management, etc., etc., etc. One of the best SS/HG stories I've read--and believe me, I've read quite a few.

Thank you!


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