Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 12/16/07 19:42
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

"Snape woke up when he heard the water begin to run in the pipes upstairs. His head immediately informed him that he had overindulged the night before. Well, what was a man to do when all he wanted was to force himself upon a schoolgirl? Drink what was left in the cauldron, obviously. It was the only logical course of action."

I love the logic in this. It kind of reminds me of the time I read Gilgamesh in ninth grade, and the immediate solution to helping the wild man Enkidu was to send in a prostitute. Okay, so it's not really that similar, but whatever.

oh, the intrusion of the real world....

I can't wait for the next chapter, as always.!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 12/16/07 17:24
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

aww Why does Severus have to make things so difficult! Great story!

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 12/16/07 16:50
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

I promise I won't hurt you! Good story!

Reviewer: hpluvsgw
Date: 12/16/07 15:23
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

Omg!!!! Poor Hermione! Well still luv all ur stories & can't wait 4 more!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/16/07 15:00
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

I totally love this story! It fits in nicely with the Christmas at hand.
But it is sad that Snape left Hermione with such typical behavior. I'm sure he still fancies her in spite of having to 'get back to business' so to speak.
I look forward (anxiously) to part 2 and the rest of the story! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: enchantme2010
Date: 12/16/07 14:33
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

*sigh* severus, you git

Reviewer: lyssa0128
Date: 12/16/07 12:59
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

Oh no, I have to wait until after Christmas to find out what is gong on????? This is TORTURE (and at Christmas too, how cruel). Great story so far!

Reviewer: ember
Date: 12/16/07 9:07
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

i won't hurt u if u hurry up with the next chapter!!!!! This is really good. I was NOT expecting that at all. What a surprise!!!!

Reviewer: holleb
Date: 12/15/07 21:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was written very well and I was instantly consumed by the the story. I can't wait for an update!!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 12/15/07 10:39
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

Gaaahhhhh! why do I enjoy this so much? I mean it's not like I even really like snape/hermione fics! or sappy christmas movie! or drunk lovers! or greasy hair! and yet....UPDATE PLEASE OR I WILL ABSOLUTLY EXPLODE WITH ANTICIPATION! or possibly just go reread one of your other fics. after i take my finals.

Reviewer: enchantme2010
Date: 12/14/07 23:56
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

gah! so close!

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 12/14/07 21:24
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

awww, how sweet! I adore your portrail of Severus's crush (for lck of better word).

Reviewer: tokiolover123
Date: 12/14/07 19:18
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

i love how you wrote this it so romantic and sweet and yet soo..... wel i dont i ran out of word to say about your story cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: hpluvsgw
Date: 12/14/07 18:00
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

Awwww! This was Sooooo romantic! And it had to stop at the best part!? I rly luv that u upd8 so fast! FANTASTIC! Luv it luv it luv IT!

Reviewer: Mariangelo
Date: 12/14/07 16:09
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

I have been reading for an hour now and cannot - will not - believe that there is not another chapter!

I... I... have no words. Firstly, I have never read Snape and Hermione, because, quite frankly, the thought of it was absurd to me. But here, I found my heart pounding with each word, my breath held with each furtive glance and an exquisite thrill run through me with their dance. Not only is this pairing believable, as you have written it, I am begging, demanding, that they have their happy ending!

Phew! I must go cool down now and practice waitning patiently for the next chapter.

The Marauding Cupcake

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 12/14/07 14:27
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

awwwww, I simply love your story so far, and what's more, Im finally excited about christmas thanks to your story! This last chapter, I had the fleeting reminder of Beauty and the Beast, just thought I'd tell you. Anyway, great story and thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Hermione_Jayne_Granger
Date: 12/14/07 14:07
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

Yet another beautiful story from you Subversa. I loved it!

It was really funny because as I was reading it, my sister brought me a cup of hot chocolate and a cinnamon Christmas biscuit. It made me laugh.

Anyway, this story was fantastic, as usual.

Reviewer: SasszSara
Date: 12/14/07 0:18
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

WOW! Loved it!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/13/07 23:33
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

I loved it! A wonderful story and I hope there's more to come!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/13/07 22:43
Chapter: Part I: Chapter 3: It's Beginning to Look A Lot Like ?

Wondrful! Snape in a Muggle home is a trip! Hermione is a very gracious host.
Nice to see him enjoying, if somewhat reluctantly, the customs of a Muggle Christmas.

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