Reviewer: LilyxElizabethxSnape
Date: 12/18/07 21:40
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

:O!!! OMG!!! You have GOT to update as quickly as possible.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/18/07 20:05
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

Excellent chapter! Seems like poor Hermione has been through the wringer1
Can't wait for the next 'episode'

Reviewer: glam_xo
Date: 12/18/07 19:39
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

:screams: Snape came back! :huggles:

Reviewer: hpluvsgw
Date: 12/18/07 19:13
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

Noooo?! Can it b? U wow us evrytime! Great job and happy holidays!

Reviewer: enchantme2010
Date: 12/18/07 17:15
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

awwww poor herms

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 12/18/07 17:09
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

what good fun this is! after indulging myself with the first six chapters of this story, I went back and reread master of enchantment and some other things you had written (a very convenient and enjoyable way of not doing classwork) and now here's another chapter! could today get any better? well, yeah, but homework doesn't do itself....

what an exciting chapter. you know, i always appreciate it when writers don't make hermione perfect. I mean, like with the bushy hair and the spots and weight gain and everything. nothing in canon says she's pretty, except for a bit at the yule ball in book four, and she had gone out of her way for that. I dunno, it just warms my heart when people make her more normal.

thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Magggs
Date: 12/18/07 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was bloody fantastic cant wait to read more! You are such a great writer! And so far this is the best Hr/S fic i have read! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 12/18/07 13:17
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

OMG! shes put on weight and sevvy is back! oh and shes wearing her winnie the pooh slippers! omg! i bet she hugs him or else goes all shy and nervous!

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 12/18/07 10:47
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

Yea! He found her!

Reviewer: peevesie
Date: 12/18/07 4:32
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

*gasp*!!! How COULD you be so heartless???!!! your cliffhangers are going to really be the death of me..... ;)
I LOVE the story...its truly amazing, and you write Snape sooo well!!! plsss update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Jazabela de la Croi
Date: 12/18/07 0:09
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

enigmatic. :)

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 12/17/07 23:23
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

*gasp*! greatness. need more please!

Reviewer: tokiolover123
Date: 12/17/07 22:39
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

ahh i love it i like how you wrote it like when it eas thier first christmas can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 12/17/07 22:07
Chapter: Part II: Christmas, 2000 Chapter 1: Blue Christmas

I really love this story!

Reviewer: Hadhafang
Date: 12/17/07 18:21
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

oh my
i almost burst into tears at that last part
i cant wait for more!
and i love The Little Prince!

Reviewer: sdemelo
Date: 12/17/07 7:28
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

Oh I always cry here.... *sniff*

Reviewer: Jazabela de la Croi
Date: 12/17/07 3:43
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

I love this story! Please let them end up together!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 12/16/07 19:42
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

"Snape woke up when he heard the water begin to run in the pipes upstairs. His head immediately informed him that he had overindulged the night before. Well, what was a man to do when all he wanted was to force himself upon a schoolgirl? Drink what was left in the cauldron, obviously. It was the only logical course of action."

I love the logic in this. It kind of reminds me of the time I read Gilgamesh in ninth grade, and the immediate solution to helping the wild man Enkidu was to send in a prostitute. Okay, so it's not really that similar, but whatever.

oh, the intrusion of the real world....

I can't wait for the next chapter, as always.!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 12/16/07 17:24
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

aww Why does Severus have to make things so difficult! Great story!

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 12/16/07 16:50
Chapter: Part 1, Chapter 6: The Gift

I promise I won't hurt you! Good story!

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