Reviews For Lost Identity
Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 12/09/07 10:46
Chapter: Lost Identity

I enjoyed reading this story...which is different for you, but as we are both taking the Dark Arts class...not surprising! You did well to mix in a lot of the discussions we had and I think you started to develop William...AKA Robert. You also showed did well characterizing him a stronger reason to hate muggles and why he disappeared as he did. Great job Sis! (although I have to admit I can't figure out why you are validated and I'm not...I was in before you!)

Author's Response: I was really trying to figure out what would turn Gryffindor's best friend against him. I think I succeeded, at least in my eyes. Thanks for the encouragement, Sis! I'm glad you think I encoruparated the class work in. :) Cyns

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