Reviewer: brianna78
Date: 03/17/09 0:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. that was great.
...not much more that I can say about that.
:)

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 11/09/08 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

lol when Lily came in and Harry went "Hello, mum." I was like: What the heck! Is Harry having a conniption? But then I realized he had died. Oh well...

Author's Response: LOL. You know, most people are sad at this fic, you just go "oh well . . ." LOL.

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 08/04/08 9:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

That's so amazing!!! You always see Harry as someone who's strong and full of life. It's different to have him old and weak.

Author's Response: Well, I don't think he's weak. He's old yes, but still strong in his own way. He hates the fact that he now must rely on other people, and tries to do things himself, so I think that makes him strong. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Nunuz
Date: 06/24/08 12:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

The story is GREAT!!!
Here is the best line in the story, for me that is,:
"where his eyes flickered open and then shut again slowly, a flash of green before death…"

Author's Response: :D Thanks! I was rather proud of that line. ;) ~Evie

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/26/08 18:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwww so sad. but so sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: island_babe
Date: 04/18/08 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

sad!!!!! :'(

Author's Response: Yes

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 03/20/08 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sweet, but did Harry have to die on Christmas?

Author's Response: Well, the challenege had to be at Christmas. Glad you liked it!rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: hermyohneetonks
Date: 02/06/08 12:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was so sad but written beautifully

Author's Response: thnx

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 01/13/08 5:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved it. My cousin showed to me, but this isn't her. I feel really sorry for Harry Junior. He spent so long on the card. :-(

Author's Response: lol, so do I! Glad you liked the story! ~Evie

Reviewer: NikkiSue
Date: 12/23/07 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

OH. MY. SALAZAR. Evie, that was one of the most heart-wrenching, most incredible stories I have read on the site in a long time and I must say . . . if you don't place in this . . . I will cry. I *did* cry, actually, as I saw the interaction between Harry and Lily. Knowing the inevitable was coming and then watching as Harry asks his mother questions about how his family will fare once he is gone. *quiver*

You know what really sealed the story for me? When you mention the plate of roasted chestnuts falling and shattering on the floor. It was so final, but having Harry and Lily walk away together once he understood he would be reunited with Ginny and his loved ones, it made it very appropriate.

Absolutely fabulous piece of work, Evie. I could learn a thing or two from you, that's for sure. Best of luck in the challenge! *hugs*

~Nicole

PS: The only constructive piece I could think of is in your end Author's note. I find it more productive to read AND review than to read A review, personally. You might want to fix that! :-)

Author's Response: NICOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! **tacklehugs** You have no idea how warm and fuzzly and full of Slytherin pride that made me feel!! Thank you so much!!! :D Heh. I will go fix that now. :o ~Evie

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 12/20/07 7:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good! It's quite sad how Harry dies but you can tell that he has a long, happy life and we all no how much he wanted a big family. It is a great symbol of hope the way he dies but it is not the end of the road. As Dumbledore said, “Death is but the next great adventure”*. I rather think this is how Harry would have died. I enjoyed this immensely. Good work!

* Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone (Sorcerer’s Stone), Chapter Seventeen: The Man with Two Faces, page 215.


Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!! :Drnrn~Evie

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 12/20/07 7:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good! It's quite sad how Harry dies but you can tell that he has a long, happy life and we all no how much he wanted a big family. It is a great symbol of hope the way he dies but it is not the end of the road. As Dumbledore said, “Death is but the next great adventure”*. I rather think this is how Harry would have died. I enjoyed this immensely. Good work!

* Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone (Sorcerer’s Stone), Chapter Seventeen: The Man with Two Faces, page 215.

Reviewer: the leaky cauldron
Date: 12/17/07 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

i love this story

Reviewer: mrsweasleymum
Date: 12/15/07 16:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is sad, but very meaningful and deep in emotion

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 12/15/07 11:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, Evie, that was lovely! I never would have predicted that the person who comes to call is someone who will take the 'old man' onto the next life. Beautiful job, and good luck in the challenge! :D

Author's Response: Thank you Anna!! :D

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 12/13/07 8:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. Amazing ;)

Reviewer: C_A_Campbell
Date: 12/12/07 21:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, that was beautiful. My attention was caught by your summary and the how vague it was of the 'old man'. I really wanted to know who it was, but I never guessed that it was actually Harry. Wonderful job of keeping it hidden.

This was a simply unique story that I know has a good shot in the contest. The only thing I wonder is why Lily came to collect Harry and not Ginny. But it doesn't matter, because it was simply lovely anyways. Good job.

Review courtesy of the Order of the House Elves.

Merry Christmas,
from the Ravenclaws

Author's Response: Thank you, you lovely claws! :D

Reviewer: C_A_Campbell
Date: 12/12/07 21:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, that was beautiful. My attention was caught by your summary and the how vague it was of the 'old man'. I really wanted to know who it was, but I never guessed that it was actually Harry. Wonderful job of keeping it hidden.

This was a simply unique story that I know has a good shot in the contest. The only thing I wonder is why Lily came to collect Harry and not Ginny. But it doesn't matter, because it was simply lovely anyways. Good job.

Review courtesy of the Order of the House Elves.

Merry Christmas,
from the Ravenclaws

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :D Thank you, OotHE! I feel so flattered! :D ~Evie

Reviewer: Weasleyboyfreak
Date: 12/11/07 18:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww! I loved it! It made me cry...I hate to admitt it. Great job!

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 12/11/07 5:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautiful - I'm now a blubbering mess (sob).

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