What a great poem. I love the effortless flow of the rhymes. I cannot find a line anywhere that doesn't fit properly. Rhyme, rhythm and tone are all immaculate.
Content wise, it tells a story, a story of redemption. I'm not sure whether Draco would actually marry a Muggle girl for I wonder if the pureblood nature of his upbringing could ever allow him to feel that way, but it is an interesting concept. Perhaps *hint hint* you should write more about Draco and Lucinda. I'd like to see them evolve from children to adults, especially as she would be largely cut off from much of Draco's life.
You have a very definite flair for poetry and it is a joy to read because it is so unstilted. Carole xxx
I really, really liked this poem/letter! This was a nice idea, and I enjoyed the way it was written. It flows really well.
Roxy! Such an amzing poet -- I loved it! It has great rhythm, like Sammy said. More more more!
I love it!, I know I have already said it but to right it down shows how much I do! It really sounds just like Draco and just makes me love him more.
All hail Roxy Black,
Though I truly can't see Draco actually writing something like this, I really enjoyed reading it. The sentiment and feelings really show through. The flow and rhyming is perfect! :)
Author's Response: I agree that I can't really see the Canon Draco writing it either - let's say it's a slightly AU poem :D Thanks for the good review. ~ Roxy
Wow this was very interesting!! I loved it!! *squeals fangirl heart out*
cant wait for more!! Great job!!! Breathtaking!!
Oh and it has been favourited x
THAT IS SUPERB
well done you
are you ever going to write harry's reply, as I think that would be very interesting and of course, if it is written by you, amazing =]]
That was a fantastic poem. And from Draco's POV too *fangirl squeal *.
I loved the rythm, the flow, the everything about it. You are a brilliant poet.=Sammy
amazing. He sounds like he actually means it, which is unusual in this kind of fic. Well done.
That's really good. I normally don't like the poetry here, but that was great!
good poem! i knew draco wasn't evil!! lol
Very well witten. I like that Draco is now conected to the 'Muggle phone-line"!
~Passion For Prongs